Aymal Aik baaR phiR Se A Beautiful Gazal .........

Dedicate to U..:slight_smile:

kaliooN ka khawab phool ki taa’beeR hai wo shakas
rang-e-rukh-e-bahaR ki tafseeR hai wo shakas

haiN is ki saltanat ki haa’daiN zahaN-o-qalab taak
dunia’ey sheR-o-fuN ka jahaN gheeR hai wo shakas

shaa’daab khud-o-khaal be isi k qalam se haiN
kuch sookhta dilooN pe be tehreeR hai wo shakas

is k talism-e-haRaf k hum sab aa’seer haiN
baiy’Ri wafa ki payar ki zanjeeR hai wo shakas

roshaN haiN is k nooR se zahanoO ki khiRkiaN
is ahad-e-be-chiRaag maiN tanveeR hai wo shakas

is baam is faRaz k laa’yeq hai is ka naam
is Oo’aj is muqaam ki tooqeR hai wo shakas

wah wah wah wah wah:k:ghazab ki ghazal hae ye to:k:kool man:) aur poety ke hero maere bhi hero;)…but where is the hero???:frowning:

Re: A Beautiful Gazal dedicated From Nikami to Poetry k Hero..Amal

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Originally posted by NikamiJano: *
Aymal jab ye gazal parhi tu is gazal main ap ki tasveer nazar aiey..tu soocha k ap ko dedicate kar de jaiey (muazrat k sath) agar ap ko bura na lagay tu..:)

*

kaliooN ka khawab phool ki taa'beeR hai wo shakas
rang-e-rukh-e-bahaR ki tafseeR hai wo shakas

haiN is ki saltanat ki haa'daiN zahaN-o-qalab taak
dunia'ey sheR-o-fuN ka jahaN gheeR hai wo shakas

shaa'daab khud-o-khaal be isi k qalam se haiN
kuch sookhta dilooN pe be tehreeR hai wo shakas

is k talism-e-haRaf k hum sab aa'seer haiN
baiy'Ri wafa ki payar ki zanjeeR hai wo shakas

roshaN haiN is k nooR se zahanoO ki khiRkiaN
is ahad-e-be-chiRaag maiN tanveeR hai wo shakas

is baam is faRaz k laa'yeq hai is ka naam
is Oo'aj is muqaam ki tooqeR hai wo shakas**
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wowww very nice ;)

very nice ;)

kali oon ka khawaab :konfused:

:k:

:rolleyes: busssssssssss??? :rolleyes:

kitnay ufsoos ki baat hay sirf ayk poem mili aap ko :slight_smile:

Amal, u deserve it ! :slight_smile:

We are all Happy and Lucky to have you around!

boht khob nikamijee:)amal bhae is lucky :) maerei liae koe dedicate hee nehe hue kabhe:(

:k:

Buhat Khoob:flower1:…

I am fortunate to have this beautiful ghazal by
such a senior member dedicated to me. It always
makes one feel good if something is dedicated to
someone. But we, unfortunately, don’t have that
kind of culture in Poetry section! And as seniors
have already become rare commodity and some who
are still around, are pathetically stiff-neck and
inactive, this gesture of NikamiJi calls on
me to still stay at Gupshup though I feel that time
to leave Gupshup is around. This will go down in my
memory as one of the most valuable day at Gupshup
as this is the very first time I have been dedicated
something. I am honoured and thankful from the
bottom of my heart:flower1::slight_smile:


Amjad Bhai aap ney waqt nikaala, aap ka bhi
be’had shukriya:flower1::slight_smile:

bahut khoob nikami siso gr8 job!

Amal bhai Big Brother u really deserved this :)

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PS : u said amjad bhai where is amjad bhai!

Buhat khoobsurat dedication hai :)

wah beautiful ghazal nikamji ji :k

Amal congrats you deserver it :-)

Realy nice Ghazal
For
Realy nice Person

:)

Thats a very Lovely gesture! ...Very nice

ap sab logo ka be-haad shukria k ap ne hamari dedicate ki huwei gazal per reply kar k isay serha k **Amal **ki hosla afzaie ki aur hum ne bohat khalos aur dil se ikhi cuz of ye gazal Amal ki personality se bohat match karti hum zaida tu nahi jantey but still jitna jantey …hum ap sab k tehay dil se shuker guzar hain…Amal deserve 4…:flower1:

nahi ET hum ne ye Busssssss k peechay se nahi parhi thei :stuck_out_tongue:

aur ET aik achay shaier k leay aik khoobsorat gazal he us ki rooh ki giza hoti hia aur am sure Amal kitna honor feel kar rahay hoon gain hamari sirf aik choti se gazal k lufzon per…jo hum ne dedicate ki unhin cuz of he deserve… aur gazal ka kafi hisa Amal ki personality ko jata..

PS: ab hamarey pass enough laziza k box nahi thay na jo Amal ko mail kar daitey wo tu sab ap k leat pack kar deay :stuck_out_tongue:

any way thanka ET

any time Amal..and i really wrote all this ~Dil Se~

PS: Amajd bahi waday lok hain ab in se kia kaha jaiey ..:slight_smile:
izhar be mushkil hia chup rah be nahi saktey
majboor hain ** Uff Alalh ** kuch kah be nahi saktey ..:stuck_out_tongue:

:-)

Oh! I feel so awful no one has used this term stiff-necked for me ever… :confused: :hoonh: :snooty: