Re: A Beautiful Gazal dedicated From Nikami to Poetry k Hero..Amal
[QUOTE] Originally posted by NikamiJano: *
Aymal jab ye gazal parhi tu is gazal main ap ki tasveer nazar aiey..tu soocha k ap ko dedicate kar de jaiey (muazrat k sath) agar ap ko bura na lagay tu..:)
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kaliooN ka khawab phool ki taa'beeR hai wo shakas
rang-e-rukh-e-bahaR ki tafseeR hai wo shakas
haiN is ki saltanat ki haa'daiN zahaN-o-qalab taak
dunia'ey sheR-o-fuN ka jahaN gheeR hai wo shakas
shaa'daab khud-o-khaal be isi k qalam se haiN
kuch sookhta dilooN pe be tehreeR hai wo shakas
is k talism-e-haRaf k hum sab aa'seer haiN
baiy'Ri wafa ki payar ki zanjeeR hai wo shakas
roshaN haiN is k nooR se zahanoO ki khiRkiaN
is ahad-e-be-chiRaag maiN tanveeR hai wo shakas
is baam is faRaz k laa'yeq hai is ka naam
is Oo'aj is muqaam ki tooqeR hai wo shakas**
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I am fortunate to have this beautiful ghazal by
such a senior member dedicated to me. It always
makes one feel good if something is dedicated to
someone. But we, unfortunately, don’t have that
kind of culture in Poetry section! And as seniors
have already become rare commodity and some who
are still around, are pathetically stiff-neck and
inactive, this gesture of NikamiJi calls on
me to still stay at Gupshup though I feel that time
to leave Gupshup is around. This will go down in my
memory as one of the most valuable day at Gupshup
as this is the very first time I have been dedicated
something. I am honoured and thankful from the
bottom of my heart:flower1:
Amjad Bhai aap ney waqt nikaala, aap ka bhi
be’had shukriya:flower1:
ap sab logo ka be-haad shukria k ap ne hamari dedicate ki huwei gazal per reply kar k isay serha k **Amal **ki hosla afzaie ki aur hum ne bohat khalos aur dil se ikhi cuz of ye gazal Amal ki personality se bohat match karti hum zaida tu nahi jantey but still jitna jantey …hum ap sab k tehay dil se shuker guzar hain…Amal deserve 4…
nahi ET hum ne ye Busssssss k peechay se nahi parhi thei
aur ET aik achay shaier k leay aik khoobsorat gazal he us ki rooh ki giza hoti hia aur am sure Amal kitna honor feel kar rahay hoon gain hamari sirf aik choti se gazal k lufzon per…jo hum ne dedicate ki unhin cuz of he deserve… aur gazal ka kafi hisa Amal ki personality ko jata..
PS: ab hamarey pass enough laziza k box nahi thay na jo Amal ko mail kar daitey wo tu sab ap k leat pack kar deay
any time Amal..and i really wrote all this ~Dil Se~
PS: Amajd bahi waday lok hain ab in se kia kaha jaiey ..
izhar be mushkil hia chup rah be nahi saktey
majboor hain ** Uff Alalh ** kuch kah be nahi saktey ..