Kushi mil jaye gi, iss ki umeed kitni hay
“shaid ayk feesud ?”
Aye waqt gawah rahna
Issi ayk feesud kay liye
Kitni ruswaaian gulay lugaai hain
Wo chooti si kiran apnay milan ka pata dayti thi
Ye kasaak dil main rah na jaye
kay hakm-e-waqt say sawal kiya tu hoota
Ub rahnay dain, khail khatum hova
kay waqt kay hain yeh hi faislay
Ye judaian hi apna naseeb thin
Aur hum bhi hain ub thukay hovay
Main tu mushriqi lurki hoon jaana
Hakm-e-sher ka ye faisla hay
Kaysy jeena kaysy murna
Kaysy roona kaysay hunsna
Sub likh diya hay
mayray nahi ye “un” kay alfaz thay, main nay tu sirf shaid ayk feesud hi kaha
Re: Aye waqt gawha rahna
unsey poochna Compromise karna assan hota hay?
keep writing aur post karney sey pehley kisi ko parhwa liya kareiN:bummer:
Re: Aye waqt gawha rahna
I know bahut hi bay rubt si things i write but Itni dafa tu likha k i am not a poet, tu phir …
Amal
September 7, 2006, 2:33pm
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Re: Aye waqt gawha rahna
Amjad bhai , keep it up, hameiN pataa hey ke aap shaer nahi heiN, phir bhi likhtey rahiye aur hum sey share karte rahiye :)
Koyal
September 7, 2006, 7:03pm
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Re: Aye waqt gawha rahna
haan na Gul theek ho tu kahti Koyal se raa’joo kia karan na ap bhooly huwey ..wesay kesay bhool k ap likhnay lagay
Koyal
September 7, 2006, 7:07pm
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Re: Aye waqt gawha rahna
Kushi mil jaye gi, iss ki umeed kitni hay
"shaid ayk feesud ?"
Aye waqt gawah rahna
Issi ayk feesud kay liye
Kitni ruswaaian gulay lugaai hain
Wo chooti si kiran apnay milan ka pata dayti thi
Ye kasaak dil main rah na jaye
kay hakm-e-waqt say sawal kiya tu hoota
Ub rahnay dain, khail khatum hova
kay waqt kay hain yeh hi faislay
Ye judaian hi apna naseeb thin
Aur hum bhi hain ub thukay hovay
Main tu mushriqi lurki hoon jaana
Hakm-e-sher ka ye faisla hay
Kaysy jeena kaysy murna
Kaysy roona kaysay hunsna
Sub likh diya hay
mayray nahi ye "un" kay alfaz thay, main nay tu sirf shaid ayk feesud hi kaha :)
kuch acha he kah laiti/laitey ye UN :)
Re: Aye waqt gawha rahna
I know bahut hi bay rubt si things i write but Itni dafa tu likha k i am not a poet, tu phir .... :(
Lo humnay itna hi kaha aur wuh bura maan gaey:-( i know aap poet nahi haiN, issiliye tou kaha tha, well often i like poetry jo Natürlich ho na:~) keep sharing we will wait for your next Item:~)
Re: Aye waqt gawha rahna
haan na Gul theek ho tu kahti
Ahhh where is my Tea :D
Re: Aye waqt gawha rahna
Amjad bhai , keep it up, hameiN pataa hey ke aap shaer nahi heiN, phir bhi likhtey rahiye aur hum sey share karte rahiye :)
Theek hay *Amal * :) thanks for understanding!