~aye umer-e-rawa`N aa pas mere...~

HeArT_HaCKeR · June 15, 2005, 10:59am

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ay umer-e-rawaN aa pas mere ik raaz ki baat batanii haii ik khwaab sunana haii tujh ko ik durd ki tees haii dil mien ik rung dekhana haii tujh ko ay umer-e-rawaN
aa pas mere
ye neem-shabii ki khamoshii
ye neend ki palkien bhoojal sii
ik khoof sa zehn-o-dil pe haii
tanhaii merii chupke se kahe
ay umer-e-rawaN aa pas mere tujh se faQat kahna hai mujhko raftaar ko apnii dheema rakh ik shaks se milna hai mujh ko ay umer-e-rawaN
aa pas mere

~Ahmed Ziya~*

Amarbail · June 15, 2005, 12:20pm

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Nice …:k:

Amal · June 15, 2005, 5:17pm

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Very nice HeArT HaCKeR :k: … thanx for sharing with us.

HeArT_HaCKeR · June 15, 2005, 8:29pm

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thanks for liking Arif bhai and Amal :)

Golden_Scorpion_1 · June 16, 2005, 6:29am

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Very Nice.. Tnx Sweety :)

HeArT_HaCKeR · June 16, 2005, 11:16am

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thx for liking GS bhaii :)

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · June 16, 2005, 11:49am

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Nice 1 HH, thanks for sharing:-)

Rameesha · June 17, 2005, 10:38pm

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masoom si nazm he, khobsorat intehaab he HH

Koyal · June 18, 2005, 3:02am

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:k:

HeArT_HaCKeR · June 18, 2005, 9:17am

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Gul, Rameesha, Koyal thanks all :)

_Miss_Meh · June 21, 2005, 9:52pm

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very nice....HH :)

reet · June 23, 2005, 12:06pm

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bahot khoob......HH

Aceones · June 28, 2005, 1:29pm

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khoobsorat nazm hay, thnx for posting

WiseGuy · June 28, 2005, 6:37pm

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Nice!

HeArT_HaCKeR · June 28, 2005, 6:49pm

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Thanks everyone:)

X_Communist · June 28, 2005, 9:07pm

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Very nice HH :k:

uDaAs_pAnChI · June 29, 2005, 1:53am

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Very nice, thanx

HeArT_HaCKeR · June 29, 2005, 10:54am

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thanks x-com, and udaas :)

system · June 29, 2005, 9:45pm

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Tujhsey faqat kehna hai mujhko
Raftaar ko apni dheema rakh
Ek shaks sey milna hai mujhko
Aye umr-e-rawaaN
Aa paas merey

Lovely nazm HH... :-)

HeArT_HaCKeR · June 29, 2005, 9:51pm

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thanks KN :)