aye qaza parwar, ye mery sath tonay kya kiya

[chand_chehra]

*

chahtoon kay baysamar baysood khyaloo-N main rakha
umer bhar nahaq mujhay tunay saraboo-n main rakha

kya mila tujh ko meri miti jo tunay ki khraab
kyu mujhay tunay tamana kay azaboo main rakha

roh ko hum khar zaroo main liye phirtay rahay
jaan-o-maal ko mubtala kitnay azaboon main rakha

ek dil-e-zindaa ko pathar ki siloo-n par rakh diya
ek gul-e-shadab ko murda kitaboon main rakha

aye qaza parwar, ye mery sath tonay kya kiya
aye ajal paisha, mera dukh kin hisaboo-n maiN rakha

[Golden_Scorpion_1]

Very Nice

[leo101]

very good , hope to see some more of the nice poetry soon

[reet]

very nice…

[ASA]

very nice… :k:

[ASA]

wow.... reet hamary khyalat kitnay mitlay haiN.... check above ^^ same wordings same number of dots ... the diff is just one ends with "flower" and other with "thumbsup" and one Sec... :)

[Aryaan]

Bohat khoob..

[m_kamal]

ek dil-e-zindaa ko pathar ki siloo-n par rakh diya
ek gul-e-shadab ko murda kitaboon main rakha

:k:

[HeArT_HaCKeR]

Boht khoob.. :k:

[ghazal_kisi_ke]

nice1:k:

[chand_chehra]

thanks for reading guys :)

[Koyal]

V nice chand g :)

[reet]

*Originally posted by AsSweetAs: *
wow… reet hamary khyalat kitnay mitlay haiN… check above ^^ same wordings same number of dots … the diff is just one ends with “flower” and other with “thumbsup” and one Sec…

really hamare khayalat bahot milty hain…

[chand_chehra]

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Koyal: *
V nice chand g :)
[/QUOTE]

thanks koyal sis :)

[Dynamic_fire]

very nice:flower1:

[chand_chehra]

*Originally posted by Dynamic fire: *
very nice:flower1:

thanks