Aye mere hamnasheen chal kaheen aur chal,

[babri]

***Aye mere hamnasheen chal kaheen aur chal,
is chaman mein ab apna guzara nahin.
baat hoti gulon tak to sehlete hum,
ab to kaaton pe bhi haq hamara nahin.
jab gulistan ko khoon ki zarorat padi
sab se pehle hamari hee gardan katee,
phir bhi kehte hain humse ye ahle chaman
ye hamara chaman hai tumhara nahin.
aaj aaye ho aur kal chale jaoge
yeh muhabbat ko meri gawara nahin,
umr bhar kaa sahara bano to bano
chaar din kaa sahara sahara nahin

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[Sheal]

Re: Aye mere hamnasheen chal kaheen aur chal,

very nice :k:

[ghazal_kisi_ke]

Re: Aye mere hamnasheen chal kaheen aur chal,

***Aye mere hamnasheen chal kaheen aur chal, is chaman mein ab apna guzara nahin. baat hoti gulon tak to sehlete hum, ab to kaaton pe bhi haq hamara nahin. jab gulistan ko khoon ki zarorat padi sab se pehle hamari hee gardan katee, phir bhi kehte hain humse ye ahle chaman ye hamara chaman hai tumhara nahin.

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:(

[babri]

Re: Aye mere hamnasheen chal kaheen aur chal,

@Sheal

very nice :k:

Sheal ek baat pochon ye is ka matlab kiya hai?

Thanks.

[NikamiJano]

Re: Aye mere hamnasheen chal kaheen aur chal,

one of ma fav thanks 4 sharin with us :)

[_Masoom_Muskaan]

Re: Aye mere hamnasheen chal kaheen aur chal,

kaha ja rehe heyn :p

[babri]

Re: Aye mere hamnasheen chal kaheen aur chal,

@_Masoom_Muskaan

kaha ja rehe heyn

jaana kahan hai MM? me here.

[tum_bin_1]

Re: Aye mere hamnasheen chal kaheen aur chal,

nice choice :k: