*~* ayadet *~*

[_Masoom_Muskaan]

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PutjharD kei moasam mei tujhko
kon sae phool ka tohfa bahijoon
mera angan khali hei
lekin meri ankhon mei
neik duwaon kee shabnam hei
shabnam ka har tara
teira anchal tham ke kehta hei
khushboo,geet,hawa,pani
orr rang ko chahnai vali laDki
jaldi sei acchi ho ja
subh-e bahaar ke ankhein kab sei
teri narm hansi ka rasta deikh rahee hein

Parveen Shakir

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4 ma sister

[S.786]

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very best..........:biggthumb

[redidentity]

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beautiful..

[abeeha]

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short but very nice:)

[bheegiyaad]

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aww such a beautiful poem
get well soon to gul

[Berhi_Bee]

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zabardest!! :)

[being_lonely]

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ps is my fav poetess

[TLK]

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Beautiful .. thanks for sharing

what a nice gesture to your sister, mashallah

[P_G]

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nice one

jee sis jaldee say achee ho jaao : )

[Shab-e-Hijar]

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aww

Get well soon gul

[muncho]

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real nice poetry and sentiments; wishing best of health to your sissooo.

[Jhanjharewali]

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ur a lovely sister musmus
allah gul ko shifaa de, ameen

[Precious_Khan]

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ALLAH Pak Unhain Sehat e Kamila Ataa Farmain ( Aameen )

[muddii]

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@_Masoom_Muskaan

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PutjharD kei moasam mei tujhko kon sae phool ka tohfa bahijoon mera angan khali hei lekin meri ankhon mei neik duwaon kee shabnam hei shabnam ka har tara teira anchal tham ke kehta hei khushboo,geet,hawa,pani orr rang ko chahnai vali laDki jaldi sei acchi ho ja subh-e bahaar ke ankhein kab sei teri narm hansi ka rasta deikh rahee hein

Parveen Shakir

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4 ma sister :) <!-- / message -->

Get well soon Gul:)

[_Masoom_Muskaan]

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@Jhanjharewali

ur a lovely sister musmus
allah gul ko shifaa de, ameen

thnx bajee pray for her she is in hosp:(

[mama_ki_dua]

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Zabardasti reply kerwati hoo MM :p Very nice poetry :)

[_Masoom_Muskaan]

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@mama_ki_dua

Zabardasti reply kerwati hoo MM :p Very nice poetry dua ke liea kaha tah koe zendage mout ke bech meyn ho to dua kerte heyn

[mama_ki_dua]

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LOL, MM zaroor dua dua nahin karay gi to aur kaun karay ga :p

[immu]

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chalo zabardasti hi sahi,,,,,,,,,,,,,,