Ay yaar teri chahaton nay rula dia !!!

Us nazar ki humein nafraton nay rula dia … !
Ay zamanay teri talkheeyon nay rula dia … !

Is hijer main kai bar humein ay dost
Nafraton nay kabhi ulfaton nay rula dia

Mohabbaton nay besukoon kar dia
Ay yaar teri chahaton nay rula dia

Log to dukhon say taraptay hain magar
Ik main hoon jisay rahaton nay rula dia

Zabt kia her ghum pay hum nay magar
Aasheeyan per giri bijlion nay rula dia

Zindagi Saahil ajab imtihan main guzri !!!
Dushmanon nay kabhi doston nay rula dia !!!

:slight_smile: nice
arif app itnay dukhi dukhi poems hi kiun :teary1:

Re: Ay yaar teri chahaton nay rula dia !!!

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*Originally posted by arifnawaz: *
Us nazar ki humein nafraton nay rula dia ... !
Ay zamanay teri talkheeyon nay rula dia ... !

Is hijer main kai bar humein ay dost
Nafraton nay kabhi ulfaton nay rula dia

Mohabbaton nay besukoon kar dia
Ay yaar teri chahaton nay rula dia

Log to dukhon say taraptay hain magar
Ik main hoon jisay rahaton nay rula dia

Zabt kia her ghum pay hum nay magar
Aasheeyan per giri bijlion nay rula dia

Zindagi Saahil ajab imtihan main guzri !!!
Dushmanon nay kabhi doston nay rula dia !!!
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buhat khoobsorat ... thanks for sharing

:k:
very nice:k:

:k:
very nice:k:

but niki is right.if possible then answer her q:)

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*Originally posted by ghazal kisi ke: *
but niki is right.if possible then answer her q:)
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Baat niklegi tu phir dooor talak jaegi... !

KISI BHI DUKH PAR MALAAL KARNA NA US KO AYA NA MUJH KO AYA
WAFAON KO LAZWAAL KARNA NA US KO AYA NA MUJH KO AYA

JO FASLEY THEY UNHAIN MITANA AGAR CHAY DONON HI CHAHTEY THEY
MAGAR TAALUQ BAHAAL KARNA NA US KO AYA NA MUJH KO AYA

wow:k:
very nice
its ok for me if baat door talak jaegi…!
but it depend on u that is it ok for u to tell us or not:)

one thig more.the sher u just post it,if this is ur answer then its really nice and i understand:)

wahhhhhhhhhh :k:
zaberdast
wasay mah samgh gaye arif ji kuch kuch :frowning:

u r right niki.something is in his life that making him sad.

Jo Saaz Se Nikli Hai, Woh Sada Sab Ne Suni Hai
Jo Saaz Pe Guzri Hai, Woh Kis Dil Ko Khabar Hai

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*Originally posted by ghazal kisi ke: *
u r right niki.something is in his life that making him sad.
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Sabab har aik mujh say poochta hai maray ronay ka
Ellahi sari duniya ko mein kaise razdan ker loon !!!

bhut khoob:k:

wow wow:)
very nice:k:
very impressive
nice answer
nice explanation
nice collection
i have no words to explain u that ur poetery is sooooooooooo good
keep posting:)
i love to read ur collection:)

Kisi ki ankh main ansoo yunhi tu nahin aatay
Sabab is ka bata dena mujhay acha nahin lagta
Woh jin ko azmaya ho,woh jin say dukh uthaya ho
Unhain dil say bhula dena mujhay acha nahin lagta

Aap ki nawazish ka bahut bahut shukriya GKK :slight_smile: Thanks for the encouragment !

that is so beautiful :k:

Haaaaa
bahut khoob aik shama hazaroon parwanay!!

I would like to thank all the Gupshup members especially NIKKI, Rameesha, Ghazal Kisi Ki, Jaan Lewaa, ShaRaRa, HeArT HaCKeR and Lamhay for your message of appreciation towards my post !

Always keep smiling :)

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*Originally posted by arifnawaz: *

Kisi ki ankh main ansoo yunhi tu nahin aatay
Sabab is ka bata dena mujhay acha nahin lagta
Woh jin ko azmaya ho,woh jin say dukh uthaya ho
Unhain dil say bhula dena mujhay acha nahin lagta

Aap ki nawazish ka bahut bahut shukriya GKK :) Thanks for the encouragment !
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u r always welcome:)and this one is also very nice:)