~ay shaam mujhe tum kuch na kaho is baar mera dil toota hai...~

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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aay shaam mujhe tum kuch na kaho is baar mera dil toota hai ya jee na sako`n wo baat kaho, is baar mera dil toota hai

mae bhool na joaoun sawan ko aansoun ki tamanna kerte ik baar hee aankho mien utro, is baar mera dil toota hai

maloom na tha k raastay mien tum bhee na raho ge saath mere
kub mae ne kaha tha saath chalo, is baar mera dil toota hai

shayad wo tarannum pehle sa mujood na ho ga, tum merii
na ghazal sunoo na geet parho is baar mera dil toota hai

aaye ehed-e-murawwat k saathii taskeen merii bus is mien hai
tum jub ye suno tu aah bharo, is baar mera dil toota hai

is jheel mien ab bhee aks tera thehra hai choot k lehjay mien
taaro`n se merii taQdeer bunno is baar mera dil toota hai

tootii nahi ho gii shayad is saal khizaa`n mien daal koii
ye zulm nahi hai kum logo, is baar mera dil toota hai

majboor hien yun tu sadiyon se dukh durd mien shairon ko likhtay
ye ghazal nayee lekin na parho, is baar mera dil toota hai
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:flower2: very nice:flower2:

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thanks DN :flower1:. .

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Wonderful , Thanks 4 sharing!

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is jheel mien ab bhee aks tera thehra hai choot k lehjay mien
taaro`n se merii taQdeer bunno is baar mera dil toota hai

:k:

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thanks lamhay and kamal bhai :)

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Hello Sweety… :slight_smile:

Nice one… :flower1:

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Wah.. Bohat khoob :flower1:

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Aryaan.. GS bhaii.. thankyou :flower1:. .

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:frowning:

very nice :k:

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thanks menu :hug:

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very nice heartu :)

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thankooo kamo uncle.. :flower1:. .

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hmmmm:)

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nice :k:

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thanks Chanduu :)

koyalluu :)

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[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by HeArT HaCKeR: *
thanks Chanduu :)

koyalluu :)
[/QUOTE]

h heartu :D

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bohut khoob .. :k: ..

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woowww

what a ghazal ? ( is it a ghazal ?:konfused:

OR

define ghazal…

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very nice HH… bouaht khoob… :k:

how r u HH? hope will be fit faat hunnn