ay mohabbat tere anjaam pe ronaa aayaa

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

ehsan May 11, 2007, 5:58pm 1

ay mohabbat tere anjaam pey ronaa aayaa
jaane kyon aaj tere naam pey ronaa aayaa

yun to har shaam ummidon mein guzar jaati thi
aaj kuchh baat hai jo shaam pe ronaa aayaa

kabhi taqdiir kaa maatam kabhi duniya kaa gila
manzil-e-ishq mein har gaam pey ronaa aayaa

jub huaa zikr zamaane mein mohabbat kaa ‘Shakeel’
mujh ko apane dil-e-naakaam pe ronaa aayaa

fghd May 11, 2007, 6:25pm 2

Re: ay mohabbat tere anjaam pe ronaa aayaa

wow kaisi choice nikli hamaray GS kay administrator ki
jis ki shaeeri ko ik baar nahee, baar baar parh kar rona aya

aDaaB:chai:

ashtray May 11, 2007, 6:32pm 3

Re: ay mohabbat tere anjaam pe ronaa aayaa

youN tou har shaam umeedoN mae guzar jaati thi
aaj kuch baat hai jo shaam pe ronaa aaya

wah.

_MuNiYa May 11, 2007, 7:01pm 4

Re: ay mohabbat tere anjaam pe ronaa aayaa

Lovely!

ehsan May 11, 2007, 7:45pm 5

Re: ay mohabbat tere anjaam pe ronaa aayaa

kaisay kaisay log hamray thread mein aa jatay hain
un ka nick parh kar un kee kismat par rona aya.

deep_ocean May 11, 2007, 8:08pm 6

Re: ay mohabbat tere anjaam pe ronaa aayaa

nice :)

fghd May 12, 2007, 12:06am 7

Re: ay mohabbat tere anjaam pe ronaa aayaa

kaisey kaisey loug aap kay iss thread may aa jatay hain
baharouN phool barsaou ..hamay daikh kar yeh aap nay gana gaya

ehsan May 12, 2007, 7:40am 8

Re: ay mohabbat tere anjaam pe ronaa aayaa

Aap kay liye phool laye
Aap ko pesh kiye
Aap kay cherey ko dekha
Pholon kee kismat pey rona aaya.

deadsoul May 12, 2007, 7:56am 9

Re: ay mohabbat tere anjaam pe ronaa aayaa

kitnay rotoo ho, har baat pe rotay rehtay ho
tum dono ko rotay dekha to mujhko bhi rona aya

nice poem ehsan

AQ May 12, 2007, 11:07pm 10

Re: ay mohabbat tere anjaam pe ronaa aayaa

Jub Intekhaabi forum maiN, sher-e-mumaasil khud hee banaayaa
Janaza-e-Urdu, zer-e-falak shor maiN uThaa, dhoom saY aayaa
(AQ)

fghd May 13, 2007, 1:12am 11

Re: ay mohabbat tere anjaam pe ronaa aayaa

jealous

KinaRa May 13, 2007, 2:52am 12

Re: ay mohabbat tere anjaam pe ronaa aayaa

nice gazal Admin sahib :)

babri May 16, 2007, 11:00am 13

Re: ay mohabbat tere anjaam pe ronaa aayaa

kisi ko kisi ki kismat par to kisi ko kisi key pholon par ronna aya
app ki kati jaali bateen sun kar hum ko ap sab par ronna aya.

alimani786 May 17, 2007, 5:48am 14

Re: ay mohabbat tere anjaam pe ronaa aayaa

Wah jee Wah....

ehsan May 17, 2007, 6:52am 15

Re: ay mohabbat tere anjaam pe ronaa aayaa

itnay log yahan aa kar roay
mujhey iss thread kay kholnay per rona aaya.

Dedicate a food item to a guppy

babri May 17, 2007, 11:03am 16

Re: ay mohabbat tere anjaam pe ronaa aayaa

na kholte app aisi thread na hi hum log rote
app k bachtawe par hum logo ko rona aya.

fghd March 20, 2008, 4:31am 17

Re: ay mohabbat tere anjaam pe ronaa aayaa

uss waqt yeh ghazal parh kar bohut roye sab
abb phir parh kar rona nahee, hamay hansna aya :D

sunny_nicky March 20, 2008, 10:25am 18

Re: ay mohabbat tere anjaam pe ronaa aayaa

buhatt khoobb hehehe :P