Ay Logoo!

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Ay Logoo! Ay loogoo piyar banto kiya pata kaal kiya ho jai kon haam main rahian kon bichar jai dillon main khoot na dallo ail loogoo piyar banto kon kaal ka sooraj dekai ga kooch pata nahin. haam kaal kahan hoon gai kooch pata nahin. jaab taak sath hai hath main hath hai piyar bato piyar banto…

Subha.:slight_smile:

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Re: Ay Logoo!

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*Originally posted by Swera: *

Ay Logoo!

Ay loogoo piyar banto kiya pata kaal kiya ho jai kon haam main rahian kon bichar jai dillon main khoot na dallo ail loogoo piyar banto kon kaal ka sooraj dekai ga kooch pata nahin. haam kaal kahan hoon gai kooch pata nahin. jaab taak sath hai hath main hath hai piyar bato piyar banto…

Subha.:)
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Very Nice...
Thank you for sharing.

Sooraj ko kia hua?
DekhaiN gay don't worry, zaroor dekhaiN gay. :)

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*Originally posted by WiseGuy: *

Thanksss…

My pleasure…:slight_smile:

InshaAllah…:flower1:

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:konfused: suraj ko kuch huwa hai kia ?

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ap kaise itne sure ho k hum kul ka soraj dekhain ge? mout ka kuch bharosa thori hai…

Nice one Swera ji :flower2:

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very good thanx for sharing

isi liye tu mien ye smillies ziada use karta hoo.n

:kiss: :hug: :love: :blush:

per kuch log reply mien sirf aise kar dete hien :snooty: :stuck_out_tongue:

:frowning:

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Re: Ay Logoo!

zabar 10.

                 hum to pahelay hi say baant rahey haiN.

kia maloom kab zindgi ki shaam ho jay.

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:k:

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aww thats so sweet yaar :slight_smile: :flower1:

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bahut khoob !

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Thats what I am asking, what happened to Sooraj?

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NahiN…zara dobara paRp poem samj aa jay gi..:slight_smile:

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Ya in ko bhi maloom hay HH ,kay mout ka kooch pata nahiN,

& yes, glad that u liked my poem:)
Thanks.

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Thank you, Shukriya, nawazish…:smiley:

See meri smily un maiN say koi bhi nahiN hay…:->

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*Originally posted by cuteAmir: *
zabar 10.

                 hum to pahelay hi say baant rahey haiN.

kia maloom kab zindgi ki shaam ho jay.
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Thank u & Welcome back!

:-)

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:slight_smile:

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My Pleasure…:slight_smile:

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*Originally posted by Lamhay: *
bahut khoob !
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Shukriya...

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Did I said kay SOORAJ ko kooch huwa? :confused:

I said “we may not see” kaal ka sooraj..
MAY NOT…doesn’t mean kay us ko kooch huwa, does it?

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Re: Re: Ay Logoo!

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*Originally posted by WiseGuy: *

Very Nice...
Thank you for sharing.

Sooraj ko kia hua?
DekhaiN gay don't worry, zaroor dekhaiN gay. :)
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tu phir ywh wise suraj ko kioun kuch kar raha hai bhaye suraj theek hai :D kal bhi theek sey aye ga

khe khe khe