auroon ka qabza hai.(nazm)

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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assalam u alaikum!
hi,i am new to this forum.this is my very first visit to this forum.i am posting my nazm .(also very first of my poetic life).hope u would like it

unwaan:-
auroon ka qabza hai,

mein woh hoon,
keh jo kuch keh nahi sakti,
keh jo kuch sun nahi sakti,
keh aankhon per meri,
kaanoan per merey,
auroon ka qabza hai,

mein kuch likh bhi nahi sakti,
keh sochoan per meri,
arzooon aur umeedoan per,
auroan ka qabza hai,

sadaa hoon mein ik aisi qaum ki keh,
jis key baitoan key,
shikasta kund zehnoan per,
auroon ka qabza hai,
so woh kuch keh nahi saktey,
so woh kuch sun nahi saktey…

ur commments r welcommed…

wassalam
aawazedost

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Re: auroon ka qabza hai.(nazm)

Bohat khoobsoorat aur maani’kheiz nazm hey:k:…Welcome to GS aawazedost:flower1:…Hope to see more of your work:)

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awesomeeeeeeeeee…:k: :slight_smile:

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sorry to be so late

assalam u alaikum!
thanx AMAL and UMMEHANI for ur liking.hoasla afzai ka behad shukria.waisey being a JUNIOR MEMBER i was not expecting to get any replies.welll thanx for welcome.

   wassalam

aawazedost

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Welcome :) Khush amded awaz e dost :)

ap ayeen acha laga ate jate raheye aisi

postings kartay raheye

bahut zaburdust .

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shukria

assalam u alaikum!
meri NAZAM ko pasand karney ka shukria NAZAM,,,khush amdeed ka bhi....

wassalam
aawazedost

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walkum aslam:)
bohut acha start lya hai and hope to see u again wiht some beautiful threads:k::flower1:
Welcome and enjoy ur stay:flower1::slight_smile: