**~~ aur ab..... ~~**

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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ab yeh mausam mayree pehchaan talab kartay hain
main jab aaya tha, yahaan taza hawa laya tha

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Re: ~~ aur ab..... ~~

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Man de Mouj: *
ab yeh mausam mayree pehchaan talab kartay hain
main jab aaya tha, yahaan taza hawa laya tha
[/QUOTE]

very nice

but is this not like this..... correct me if i am wrong

aab ya mausam kharaj talab kartay hain
main jab aaya tha, yahaan taza hawa laya tha

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wah.. Lovely!

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Nice.

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wah wah

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Re: ~~ aur ab..... ~~

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Man de Mouj: *
ab yeh mausam mayree pehchaan talab kartay hain
main jab aaya tha, yahaan taza hawa laya tha
[/QUOTE]

Bohat acha shair hai :-)

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Re: Re: ~~ aur ab..... ~~

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*Originally posted by Dilsay: *

very nice

but is this not like this..... correct me if i am wrong

aab ya mausam kharaj talab kartay hain
main jab aaya tha, yahaan taza hawa laya tha
[/QUOTE]

thanks for liking Dilsay....well, I dont know whether u r right or mine is right....wherever I read, I read that way.....anyway, I take you as correct........you know " I make people feel like winners ".

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bohat acha shyir hai :)

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Re: Re: Re: ~~ aur ab..... ~~

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Man de Mouj: *

thanks for liking Dilsay....well, I dont know whether u r right or mine is right....wherever I read, I read that way.....anyway, I take you as correct........you know " I make people feel like winners ".
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haan na yaar .. aap kay hissay kay aangoor humyasha k'hattay hi hotay hain :(

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[QUOTE]
Originally posted by ** Vivacious ***: *
bohat acha shyir hai :)
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Thanks a lot VIV