Asrar-ul-Haq "Majaz" kii ek dilaa_aavez Ghazal

is bahtareen Ghazal ke saath ek mazaaHiyah she’r BONUS meN:

vo apnii yaad dilaane ko ek ishq kii dunyaa chhoR gaye
jaldii meN lipistik bhool gaye, roomaal puraanaa chhoR gaye


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Re: Asrar-ul-Haq “Majaz” kii ek dilaa_aavez Ghazal

second last shair :lajawab:

baqi sare mushkil aur classic Urdu ke ashaar hain.. gul, boota, patta, bahar.. aisi shayari old fashion ho gai. I think ke Ghalib ne bhi aise shair nahin kahe the

Re: Asrar-ul-Haq "Majaz" kii ek dilaa_aavez Ghazal

true, Ghalib kii jo Khaas baat thii vo unkii zabaan o bayaan kii chustii ke saath saath nudrat e Khayaal jiske zar'iiye vo ma'mooli sii baat meN bhii vazan Daal diyaa karte the...mere Khayaal se Ghaalib se ziyaada zarb-ul-imsaal misr'e kisii shaa'ir ne nahiiN kahe...har Ghazal meN ek yaa do she'r/misr'e aise zaroor hote the jo aaj zarb-ulimsaal kaa darja rakhte haiN. yeh zabaan o bayaan kii mahaarat sirf unhiiN kaa Khassah thaa.

Re: Asrar-ul-Haq "Majaz" kii ek dilaa_aavez Ghazal

true .. so many zarb ul misl in Ghalib's poetry. ek alag thread ban sakti hai us per to

Re: Asrar-ul-Haq "Majaz" kii ek dilaa_aavez Ghazal


bilkul...aap bismillah kareN! :) aapne makkhii ke chhatte meN haath Daalaa hai to shahed bhii aap hii nichoReN! :D