aslaha

tum apneye seb wohh neizeye nikal leye ao
jhooth keye, mayoosi keye dard keye
dukh keye, fareib keye,
zulm keye jaal keye, baed gumani keye,
apni baed-dillee keye, na-chaki keye
na-semjhee keye, seb shakook keye
shubhaat keye, bey-sabree keye

setch keye, ummeed keye
sukh keye, unt wafa keye
guncheye nerm ehsas keye,
husn-e-salook keye
dil-joee keye, hans mukh seye,
semhj-dari keye, hemdard ba-khebree keye
eitabar keye, itminan keye
meye yeye apneye neizeye leye aoon

yoon khoob larein geye than keye
aye dil, tum deikna…
koe keisye jeeteye, phir
aur,
kon keiseye hareye

  • Dushwari

Re: aslaha

setch keye, ummeed keye
sukh keye, unt wafa keye
guncheye nerm ehsas keye,
husn-e-salook keye
dil-joee keye, hans mukh seye,
semhj-dari keye, hemdard ba-khebree keye
eitabar keye, itminan keye
meye yeye apneye neizeye leye aoon

'dhaal' would be more appropriate, i think; nice effort as always :)

Re: aslaha

muncho,
why dhal, and whose?

Re: aslaha

:)

Re: aslaha

thanks, sunny nicky.
best,
Dushwari

Re: aslaha

Bohat khoob Dushwari..:k:

Re: aslaha

thanks, Aryaan.

best,
Dushwari