AsGhar GonDvii aur mere vaalid merhoom kii GhazleN

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AsGhar Husain “AsGhar” GoNDVii kii Ghazal**

**1.
aalaam-e-roz_gaar ko aasaaN banaa diyaa
jo Gham huaa use Gham-e-janaaN banaa diyaa

maiN kaam_yaab-e-diid bhii, meHruum-e-diid bhii
jalvoN ke azdahaam ne HairaaN banaa diyaa

ham us nigaah-e-naaz ko samjhe the neshtar
tum ne to muskuraa ke rag-e-jaaN banaa diyaa

yuuN muskuraaye jaan sii kaliyoN meN paR gaii
yuuN lab_kushaa huye k gulistaaN banaa diyaa

us Husn-e-kaar_o_baar ko mastoN se poochhiye
jisko fareb-e-hosh ne 'asyaaN banaa diyaa

majboorii-e-Hayaat meN raaz-e-Hayaat hai
zindaaN ko maiN ne rauzan-e-zindaaN banaa diyaa

kuchh shorishoN kii nazar huwaa khoon-e-'aashiqaaN
kuchh jam k rah gayaa usay HirmaaN banaa diyaa

bulbul ba_aah-o-naalah o gul mast-e-rang-o-boo
mujh ko shaheed-e-rasm-e-gulistaaN banaa diyaa**

Ali Z. Usmani kii Ghazal

**1.
ab dil ko ham ne banda-e-jaanaaN banaa diyaa
ik kaafir-e-azal ko musalmaaN banaa diyaa

dushvaariyoN ko 'ishq ne aasaaN banaa diyaa
Gham ko suroor, dard ko darmaaN banaa diyaa

us jaaN-fazaa 'etaab ke qurbaan jaaiye
abroo kii har shikan ko rag-e-jaaN banaa diyaa

barq-e-jamaal-e-yaar! yeh jalva hai yaa Hijaab
chashm-e-adaa_shinaas ko HairaaN banaa diyaa

ai zauq-e-justuju! tirii himmat pe aafriiN
manzil ko har qadam pe gurezaaN banaa diyaa

uThii thii bai’Hr-e-Husn se ik mauj-e-be_qaraar
fitrat ne usko paikar-e-insaaN banaa diyaa

ai soz-e-naa_tamaam! kahaaN jaaye ab :Khaleel: [a.s.]
aatish_kade ko bhii to gulistaaN banaa diyaa

vaa_raftagaan-e-shauq ko kia dai’r kia Haram
jis dar pe dii sadaa, dar-e-jaanaaN banaa diyaa

aaNsoo kii kia bisaat, magar josh-e-'ishq ne
qatre ko mauj, mauj ko tuufaaN banaa diyaa

kia ek maiN hii maiN huuN is aaiina_Khaana meN
mujhko to kashf-e-raaz ne HairaaN banaa diyaa**

shukria

Re: AsGhar GonDvii aur mere vaalid merhoom kii GhazleN

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Re: AsGhar GonDvii aur mere vaalid merhoom kii GhazleN

very nice sharing :)

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*thank you *

thank you S-e-H for liking the Ghazals

Re: AsGhar GonDvii aur mere vaalid merhoom kii GhazleN

very nice sharing KKF :k:

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Very Nice Khalil..:k:

Re: AsGhar GonDvii aur mere vaalid merhoom kii GhazleN

Ali saaHab aapkii pasandeedgii kaa bahot bahot shukria :slight_smile:

Aryaan saaHib aapkaa bhii bahooot bahooot shukria k aapne Ghazaliyaat pasand farmaayiiN :slight_smile:

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Khalil bhai in ghazloN ke baarey meiN kya kaha ja sakta hey. Bohat hi shaandaar aur mayaari. DonoN ghazleiN apney likhney waley ki soch aur mahaarat ki pukhtagi ke baarey meiN bataati heiN. Quote karne ke leeye bohat kuch hey, lekin kya, kya quote karooN:

Kya khoobsoorat aur gehri baat kahi hey… wah…maza aa gaya :k:

Khalil bhai ye ghazleiN hamaarey saath share karne ke leeye be’had shukriya :slight_smile:

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Indeed, bahut umdaah …:k:

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khaalil ji ap ko fakhta kahoon ya kia kahoon kuch samjh nahin aya khaalil khaan tu sahi ye faakhta kyo hua? agar ap bura na manay.............ghazalien tu shaandar hain aur ye vaalid e marhoom se ap ka ishara samjh na aya?
i mean ur father or i mis understood......?

Re: AsGhar GonDvii aur mere vaalid merhoom kii GhazleN

shukria janaab aapkaa k aapko Ghazaliyaat pasand aayiiN aur aapne ek she’r kii nishaan dehii bhii kii…mujhe bhii yeh she’r bahot pasand aayaa. bas janaab, vo log guzre huye daur kii nishaanii haiN, vo daur jo zaraa muKhtalif thaa.

**bahot abhot shukria aapkaa Amar saaHab. **

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kuchh bhii kah leN ji kia farq paRtaa hai. whats there in the name?! Ghazaliyaat pasand karne kaa shukria.

ji ji…mere father kii Ghazal thii dusri waali. mere Dad isn’t alive and thats why used the word marHoom [the one upon whom be Allah’s blessings, aameen]**

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Allah Pak aap ke marhoom walid ko jannat-ul-firdous mein aa'laa muqaam ata farmayain aur un ke darajaat ko bulanda farmayain ... Aameen !!!

Re: AsGhar GonDvii aur mere vaalid merhoom kii GhazleN

Yaqeenan, wo to in takhaleeq ki waza-qata sey hi wazeh hey.

Re: AsGhar GonDvii aur mere vaalid merhoom kii GhazleN

Khuda aap ke walid-e-marhoom pe apni rehmat farmaey. Aameen.

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aameen...Allah aapko Khsuh rakkhe sadaa...aameen

ji...puraanaa andaaz hai...trasditional shaai'rii

aameen. Allah aapko sadaa Khush rakkhe...aameen

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Nice sharing :k:

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Thank You Bro :slight_smile:

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kuchh bhii kah leN ji kia farq paRtaa hai. whats there in the name?! Ghazaliyaat pasand karne kaa shukria.

ji ji...mere father kii Ghazal thii dusri waali. mere Dad isn't alive and thats why used the word marHoom [the one upon whom be Allah's blessings, aameen]**
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Allah tallah ap k Vaalid k Darjaat Bulaand farmaye or unko janat main alla mukaam ata farmaye Ameen suma Ameen

i know the meaning of marhoom magar main sirf confirm karahi thee u know baghair confirm kiye kuch keh dena baat kharab hojati hai jabhi main nay ap se pocha k ap k valid-e- marhoom ki ghazal hai or no doubt its amazing i dont have words .......excellent !

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summa aameen. are aisii koii baat nahiiN...jaane anjaane meN bhool chook ho bhii jaatii to koii baat nahiiN thii. vaalid ke intiqaal ko ek zamaana ho gayaa...16 years almost. Khair.

shukria aapkaa k aapne Ghazal pasand farmaayii. AsGhar GonDvii mere vaalid ke ustaad the jo Jigar Muradabadi ke bhii ustaad the.**

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Wow im really impressed......ye khush kismaati thehri ap k vaalid-e- marhoom ki aur aik tarhan se ap ki bhi :)