dhoondtay reh gaey us raat kay fasanay hum
gar itna na huwa tum say kay loat kay a jatay
kis qadr tanhai hai is mor pay teray bina
her saans mein meri teray naam ki garmi hai
ye jo yaadaen haen teri, bunkay deeya jalati houn mein
her ahut pay saans ubharti hai per tum nahi atay
zikr tera sunti houn mehfiloun may ab mein
jaam bun jaoun un hontoun ka jo karay tareef teri
ankh sard hoti hai to karaar aata hai dil ko
teri yaad jub is dil ko cheer kay nikal jati hai!!!
Re: Arz Keeya Hai…
Koran is it ur own poetry ?
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bht nice
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Wow Nice Korn 
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yes ABSOLUTELY my own poetry
agar to faiz ya meer nay claim kernay ki koshish ki phir
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Lolz I Was The Inspiration For This Poem Sannan Bhai !!!
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Ho agar fursat to bula layna humaen
Do pal ro ker juda ker dayna humaen
Her chaand dayta nahi ab nazara tumhara
Her raat dayti nahi wo khumaar tumhara
Ker chukay hotay hum fana khud ko teri chah mein
Fakat zinda ho pooch he laytay aik baar tum hum say
Reh na jaey koi zakhm hara aey dil e baimaan
Is dil kay aagosh mein sada koi day he daytay tum
Her simt dhoondti hai ye nazr tujhay
Ik baar humaen baahoun mein lay he laytay tum!!!
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yeah yeah BM u n ur motherboard inspiration 
hey hey don’t fired too much i was just asking as khiyal is very nice but korn can u tell me it is Ghazal or Poem 
Don’t take it my words in wrong sense as i just wanted to advise you something …
so its mean u r getting very famous in Cafe 
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sannan g
i don’t know, i just keep on writing and writing 
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sannan don’t take BM words he is a nung puung show off
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@korn : Ha Ha Me Motherboard… i Thought I Shall Stick As Father Board !!!
@sannan : you bet 
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chalo tum tamgaah lay lo
fatherboard khush…
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Nah Not Happy !!!
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b/w wat do u think of my second installment in green?
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zikr tera sunti houn mehfiloun may ab mein
jaam bun jaoun un hontoun ka jo karay tareef teri
Very nice Korny :k:
kyun rakhu main ab apni kalam mein syahi, jab koi armaan dil mein machalta hi nahi,
na jane kyun sabhi shak karte hain mujh par, jab koi sukha phool meri kitab main milta hi nahi,
kashish to bahut thi mere pyar mein, magar kya karu koi pathar dil pighalta hi nahi,
agar khuda mile to usse apna pyar manguga, par suna hai woh marne se pehle milta hi nahi!!!
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thank you
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very nice BM
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lahu bun ker teray jism mein bundh ho jaoun mein
nazr bun ker teri ankhoun mein bus jaoun mein
daawa wo keeya kertay thay, hum milaengay phir dobara
pyaas bhujti nahi ub kis terha usay rulaoun mein
chuutay he uskay jo aa jata tha ruh ko karaar
bay waja her kisi say uska pata kyun puchwaoun mein
her shart per meri wo haan kerta tha zalim
ik sadi beet gai, uski muskerahut kaisay bhulaoun mein!!!