Appne shair or appni ghazal

pakgirl · October 30, 2002, 2:59pm

Jaddu karte nahi,
bhass hojatha hei.
Karte waqt Labon appne Jaar ka nam hota hei.
Yehi baat kisi ko keihne me sharam aathi hei.
Raato ki neend chura leta hei,
lekin Sapno me appna Jaar dikhahy deta hei.

Dil pe cha jata hei,
islie to sab kuch bhool pate hei.
Iss me Ikrar hota hei,
islie to loog chup-chupke pyar karte hei.
Jeene ka matlab mill jatha hei.
Rokhne wale bhi chud rukh jaathe hei,
lekin who kabhi nahi rukhta.

Karne se banda dharta or ghabrahta hei,
lekin Ankho me who hi baat dikhahi deti hei,
jo Dil pe likhi hoti hei.

BHASS YEHI TO PYAR HEI,
pyar hei,

YEHI TO PYAR HEI, jo sabko
hojatha hei.

Amal · October 30, 2002, 3:22pm

Welcome to Gupshup pakgirl:)

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · October 30, 2002, 4:44pm

Nice Try Pakgirl, keep it up ,Thanks for sharing
Khushamdeed

arifnawaz1 · October 30, 2002, 4:56pm

Welcome !

ShaRaRa · October 30, 2002, 4:58pm

welcom n nice try:k:

Capricorn · October 30, 2002, 5:08pm

Nice poem :k:
Welcome here

nikii · October 30, 2002, 8:06pm

welcome to GS

SunnyBoy · October 30, 2002, 10:18pm

Nice .. And WelKom on GS

Lamhay · October 31, 2002, 8:30am

well thanks 4 sharing and welcome!

pakgirl · October 31, 2002, 1:11pm

So thnx a lot !!! And thnx for like my ghazal but its not my last !!!11