Apology to Parveen Shakir - Parody

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Although, I have decided not to share my poems on this board anymore but this one is the one that can be an exception:D

This is inspired by Parveen Shakir. Ma’azrat kaY saath:p

Raat daawat maiN sub hee thaa, par meeThaa naa thaa
Qourmay maiN haaN taar thaa, par shorbaa naa thaa

Woh laY gayaa thaa Burns Road kuch khilaanaY kay liYe
Sharbat tau thaa wahaaN laikin charghaa naa thaa

Woh chalaa aayaa mooNh uThaa kar Mehfil maiN yooN
peYr maiN jootaa tau thaa, par feetaa naa thaa

Kee ZulfaiN daraaz uss naY model bunn-naY kaY shoq maiN
Gel baaloN maiN thaa, pass magar kaNghaa naa thaa

Piyaas saY taRap kar maaNgaa jo paani ka ik glass
DiYaa uss nay mujh ko ik kaTora, par woh ThanDaa naa thaa

Aam kay Mosam maiN aam khaaiYe, seb kay mosam maiN seb
Phool detaY kaaNtay kay siwaa, aisaa apnaa dhandhaa naa thaa

Khaa kar jootiYaaN girls college kay baahir uss nay kuch yooN kahaa
“Qasam khudaa kee, MajnooN bhee mujh jaisaa aashiq naa thaa!”

Lay kar gayaa thaa jub girl friend ko woh date par
chawaani tau kiYaa, jeb maiN uss kee ik dhelaa naa thaa

Mehboobaa nay uss ki, choRnaY saY pehlaY uss ko yeh kahaa
Raho geY yaadoN maiN tum meri, uss kaY Qaabil woh ik bandaa naa thaa

“Masjid tau banaa dee shub bhar maiN, ImaaN kee haraarat waaloN naY”
Bill bharnaY kaY liYe Anwaar, pass magar unn kay chandaa naa thaa

AQ
12:18 AM 7/3/2005

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:hehe:
Buhat hee aala :biggthumb

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had hay waqi lol

Bhookay shair :-p

I namoona-te this the best of the month(s) kay

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Thanks Capri & Daadu :D

Welcome Back Anwaar :)
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:rotfl: Tauba..!! waqaee hi hadd hai… Bahut khoob! :hehe:

GhairoN ka zikr kar kar key, sunaatey they woh apni kahani
Baghair GupShup key, sar chupaaney ke liye ghoNsla na thaa

Na khul jayeiN saarey raaz yuN poorey Gupistan meiN
Sach bolney key liye paas Anwaar key hoNslaa na thaa

:smiley:

KN
10:52 PM 7/4/2005

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^
thanks but your ashaars are irrelevent:snooty:

when did I do “GheroN kaa zikar” :hoonh: ?

and I am very much hosla afzaa person cuz I drink lot of Rooh Afzaa…:stuck_out_tongue: aisay hee I was not banned few times.. It’s all called hosla… :jhanda:

Rooh Afza for you :smiley:

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^-- I know aapka zikr ismeiN thoRa bahut hai… lekin zyada to kahani “uss” ki lag rahi hai :bummer:

Mujhey kya pata aap kitni dafa ban hue haiN… I thought you just left GupShup for a while :konfused: ChaleiN, ager aap issey hoNslaa kehtey haiN… to yehi hoga shayad :-p

Badal garaj rahey haiN, biljiyaN chamak rahi haiN… aur saath meiN rooh Afza ka gilaas… yummy Thank you :slight_smile:

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saari kahaani "Mushaahidaati" hai, "Haadsaati" naheeN --- Jug beeti hai, aap beeti naheeN... :p

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kesi ke shaieri ka is terha mazaq urhana achi baat nahi hay :p

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aindah phir meri shaairy kaa mazaq naheeN uRanaa :snooty: :stuck_out_tongue:

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aunty ki rooh bay chain ho gai ho gi qabr main :stuck_out_tongue:
waisay nice effort :k:

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:mad: gusay main ro rahe ho gee =(( ..

and I agree with IS =/

LONDON........
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Thankew everyone :p:blush:

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Excellent follow up, Guriya :hehe:
Lub your talent :flower1:

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So everyone misses the sad part of this thread - very sad! :frowning: Here it is:

Have we become pathetic or did we simply miss it? Guys how could you allow such a nice poet like Anwar to stop sharing his poems with you? Not a single question to ask why and not a single word to protest whatever the reason is. Anyway, Anwar Mian, please don’t stop sharing your poems with us. You are a very very nice poet and please do not deprive us of your creative work. Let them flow :slight_smile:

Bolnay Waley cheezain...... (merged)
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Amal: thanks for that. I even did not care why people missed the ironic part of the thread:D for more or less the same reason due to which you had stopped coming here also :wink:

I knew you were right to take that action but I protested against it at that time too for I did not want to lose a poet who was the biggest reason for me to visit poetry forum. I still believe in my own saying We should not leave many for a few…

I am still here… I won’t go :insha: for I am not a bay wafaa:D; however, my poetry can be read in my journal…

----> TimePass
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:eek: mai nay aap ke shaairy ka kab mazaq uthaya hay :eek: mai nay to wasi shah ke nazam ka hashar nashar kiya tha :blush:

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I didn’t ask because I knew this a long time ago.. and the reason too (kinda) .. plus i have been reading his poetry in his journal =)

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:hehe:

Bravo Anwar Bhai… :slight_smile:

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GS jiger: I have another version of a parody.. this time it’s hashar nashar of Wasi Shah’s “Kaash maiN teraY haath kaa ik haseen KaNgan hotaa” :smiley:

I guess, with your permission I can share it too:D but you have to take the responsibility of saving me from getting banned :hehe: