AOA Guys,
Hope you are well and doing great.
After such a long time felt to share something with you guys. Hope you will like it.
Apni zindagi tu
Ik tit’lee ki manind hey ju
Shokh rangoun mein hey doobi
Nasheeli hawayoon mein hey bheegi
Madhoosh khushbu mein hey nahayee
Per ik Kitaab mein band hey
Do warqoon key madfan mein dafan hey
chodhry
Re: Apni zindagi tu ik tit'lee ki manind hey...
Main aur wo kuch iss tarha yakjan thay shezad
Jis tarha phool min khushbo basi hoti hai
Re: Apni zindagi tu ik tit’lee ki manind hey…
Sher acha hey per no comments 
Did you like it? 
Re: Apni zindagi tu ik tit'lee ki manind hey...
w.salam
Per ik Kitaab mein band hey
Do warqoon key madfan mein dafan hey
very nice :)
Re: Apni zindagi tu ik tit'lee ki manind hey...
kia baat hei chodhry saab..bohat achhi.
Re: Apni zindagi tu ik tit'lee ki manind hey...
agreed
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Bahut pyaari naz'm hai Touseef.. Kaafi der baad aapka likha hua kuch paRhney ko mila hai, par likhney ka andaaz abhi bhi wohi hai... simple sa... and that's what I like about your poetry... :-)
Re: Apni zindagi tu ik tit’lee ki manind hey…
Nazm bohat achi hey, especially the concept. Aur likha bhi bohat acha gaya hey. Simple but very impressive. :k: Thanx for sharing it with us and don’t disappear again — please
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sweet words...
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Thanks guys!
Thanks KN, actually likha hi bohat arsa baad hey. I think you cant just sit and write without any motivation and mine seems dead long ago.
Amal thank you very much for all that praise and welcoming me back. Honestly, I do want to come here as often as I used to do but just cant possible these days. Hopefully, some day wo kia kehtey hein agar zindagi ney waffa ki tu... And seriously, you guys are doing a great job keeping this forum alive. Keep it up.
:)
Re: Apni zindagi tu ik tit'lee ki manind hey...
Thanks KN, actually likha hi bohat arsa baad hey. I think you cant just sit and write without any motivation and mine seems dead long ago.
Well, writing without motivation is quite possible.. People who manage this know how to praise others, but aren't aware of their own hidden talents... And to me you're one of them :-)
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KN, sometimes it's not about "knowing your hidden talents" but "using your hidden talents". There is BIG difference in both. I have problems with the later, I need an object to crave, be it anybody, anything, to use my talent, something interesting enough to stimulate my mind.
Re: Apni zindagi tu ik tit'lee ki manind hey...
Awesome!!
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thanks Fara.