Apni ya kisi aur ki ankhoon pe shair likhyai

mama_ki_dua · February 7, 2009, 6:09pm

lol nahin mere ashar nahin hain

awww

GN: jin ki ankhain hain unhain pata hai keh yahan unki ankhain post ki ja rahi hain

Dubaiwali · February 7, 2009, 6:13pm

Re: Apni ya kisi aur ki ankhoon pe shair likhyai

titli tumhari ankhai jo dekh li hai

goodnews · February 7, 2009, 6:31pm

Mujhey tu patta hai na:wink:
**And you must have know ke dill ko dil se rah hoti hy;)
After typing that I know for sure he will make each and every effort to prove me wrong:faizy:
**

ASA · February 7, 2009, 7:13pm

Teri aankhon main udasian to bouhat hai
tu ne hontoN pe muskurahat ko saja rakha hai,
kash koi tery dil ki gehraiyon ko samjhay
**tum ne khud ko khud he main chupa rakha hai, **

goodnews · February 7, 2009, 8:46pm

wah!Wah! Wah!
ASA kiya baat hai. Tum ne meri ankhon main woh cheez daikhi ju mujhey bhi kabhi nazar naahi aai:wink:

Kaka_MaNNa · February 7, 2009, 9:15pm

wah GN ji, tusi te kamaal kar dita

main shair wagaira tou nahi, par eik koshish hai:

meri aankh main dekho kya nazar ata hai
sadiyoon ka safar pal main guzar jata hai
meri aankh main tera chehra nazar ata hai
tum chalay ghaye par tera sath yaad ata hai

goodnews · February 7, 2009, 10:17pm

**wah! Jaan Leva tumhin tu tumhari ankhon ne shair bhi bana diya:eek:
Buhat achey:k:

**
**PS: Akhri misra kuch bywazan sa lag raha hy;) Tera ke sath Tu chalta hy
Tu chala giya per tera sath yad ata hai:)
Tum chaley giey per tumhara sath yad ata hai:D

agar aap ki ijazat hu tu aap ki zameen main ham bhi try martey hain:D

Meri Ankhon main tera chehra nazar ata hai
falak per guya chudhwin ka chand nazar ata hai******
** kabhi sawan ki ghataon ka saman hota hai
Jab dill main teri yaad ka teer gara hota hai
Trea sms aey tu ghunchaey dill khila hota hai
Na koi khabar aye tu askhon ka ocean hota hai
Meri ankhon main tera chehra nazar ata hy
Raat mushkil hi sahai par din tu guzzar jata hai:hehe:
**

Kaka_MaNNa · February 7, 2009, 10:55pm

Re: Apni ya kisi aur ki ankhoon pe shair likhyai

janaab hum ap ka mokabla tou nahi kar sakte na shairy main :D

goodnews · February 7, 2009, 10:59pm

Re: Apni ya kisi aur ki ankhoon pe shair likhyai

**^ Shukriya magar ham muqabla nahi ker rahy bas in ashar se kuch ashaar sunna dale (ya tuk bandi kehiy) dimagh main aaiey tu aap ki ijazat laity hoy(Ijazat khiyalon main formality puri kerny ko li gai thi pryshan maat hoiey ga)
**

mama_ki_dua · February 7, 2009, 11:04pm

Re: Apni ya kisi aur ki ankhoon pe shair likhyai

nice to see keh meri thread aab tak kafi popular hai :p

goodnews · February 7, 2009, 11:13pm

Re: Apni ya kisi aur ki ankhoon pe shair likhyai

**Aik Azad Nazm (mukamal azad bhi nahi hy:D)kahi hai do din pehly magar post kerney sey pehly Guess the guppies thread band hu giya socha yahan post ker don
Mulahyza farmaiy Azad Nazm kuch Pababndion ke sath
****Arz kiya hai,
**
Ye Ankh kis ki ankh hai:hmmm:

Ye ankh kis ki ankh hai
Is ankh main
Kuch shafqat bhi hai
kuch sharfat bhi hey
Kuch malamat bhi hy
Kuch adalat bhi hy
Kuch sharaat bhi hy
kuch khabasat bhi hy
kuch shujaat bhi hy
Kuch sadaqat bhi hy
Kuch shahdat bhi hy
kuch dawat bhi hy (muzakrat ki:D)
Kuch adawat bhi hy
Kuch nazakat bhi hey
kuch sakhawat bhi hey
Kuch matanat bhi hy
kuch hidyat bhi hey
Kuch kifaiyat bhi hai
Kuch inayat bhi hai
Kiya nahi is ankh main:eek:
Akhir!
ye ankh ki ski ankh hy:confused:
Ye ankh GS director ki ankh hey
Ye ankh Nikki key hubby ki ankha hai
Ye ankh hamary Tillo ki ankh hai
Adab Araz

Kaka_MaNNa · February 8, 2009, 12:13am

ap ki thread nahi, ap popular ho.

goodnews · February 8, 2009, 12:44am

Maery mu ki baat cheen li JL ney:D

TLK · February 8, 2009, 1:43am

yeah azaad nahi, madar padar azaad nazam he

goodnews · February 8, 2009, 3:17am

This is a compliment indeed:D
**Ab agey nazam puri ker hi don
****Kahu kiya nahi hy is GS director ki ankh main:aq:
Giraawat nahi
**Jahalat nahi
Khajalat nahi
**** Ab tu nana dada azad hu gai ye nazm:hehe: