ek nazar mein kai zamaane dekhe to
budhi aankhon ki tasveer banane de
baba duniya jeet ke dikhla doonga
apni nazar se door to mujhko jaane de
phir to yeh ooncha hi hota jayega
bachpan ke haathon mein chaand aa jaane de
mein bhi to is baagh ka ek parinda hoon
meri hi awaaz mein mujhko gaane de
nice1 .. :k: ..
phir to yeh ooncha hi hota jayega
bachpan ke haathon mein chaand aa jaane de
Beautiful..
thx for sharin’ daagho uncle .. .
Adaab Daagh Sahib,
aap ne farmaya hai:
mein bhi to is baagh ka ek parinda hoon
meri hi awaaz mein mujhko gaane de
Arey Dagh Dehlvi Sahib Gaayiyeh Gaayiyeh janab apni awaz maiN gaayiyeh ya kisi aur ki awaz maiN gaayiyeh, ba'shart yeh k awaz soreeli honi chahiyeh, na ke besuri. KahiN aisa na ho ke aap gana shooroh karin aur gupshup viraan ho jaye
maazrat ke sath
Saqi
guess what daaghu uncle! i understood most of it! thankyou for posting it.., beautifully written 
Zabardast
Wah, Bohat khoob .. :k:
:k:
NICE
bahut Daagh Bhaiya :)
Re: apni nazar se door to mujhko jaane de…
awwwwwwwwwww main chatri lay k ajawan 
nice one
ek nazar mein kai zamaane dekhe to
budhi aankhon ki tasveer banane de
baba duniya jeet ke dikhla doonga
apni nazar se door to mujhko jaane de
very nice…:k::k:
bohot khoob Daagh jee :)
Aray Dagh Sahib KahaN hai Aap???
Lagta hai Gaaney maiN mosoof masrof haiN!!!! Rab Khair karey
many thanks all for appreciating 
Koyal jee… aa jaye na
SKN 
good you understood
NICE :k: