apni hasrat ko maiN taqdeer bana'ooN kaisey

Koyal · November 12, 2006, 8:00pm

**dil ki dharkan hai khayaloon maiN merey rehta hai ** **koun hai wo jo sawaaloon main merey rehta hai **

**jisko dekha na kabi us sey wafa karta hooN **
**dil ke aainey mai maiN us se mila karta hooN **

**maiN nahi janta ye kis ki talab hai mujhko **
**kis ka armaaN iraadoN maiN merey rehta hai **

**khawaab hai wo mera taabeer dilaouN kesey **
**apni hasrat ko maiN taqdeer bana’ooN kaisey **

**mujh ko milta hai sakoon uska tassawar karke **
**wo ishara jo isharooN maiN merey rehta hai **

**kis ki tareef maiN likhi ye ghazal kiya janoo **
kis ko kehta hooN mohabat ka kanwal kiya janoo

**maiN tu bas aik hi umeed maiN rahta hoon sada **
us ko dekhoon jo nazrooN maiN merey rehta hai

Jhuki_Nigahein · November 13, 2006, 6:02pm

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very nice sharing :)

Berhi_Bee · November 13, 2006, 6:49pm

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bohet khoub :)
thx 4 sharing

sunny_nicky · November 13, 2006, 8:32pm

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niceeee

HeArT_HaCKeR · November 14, 2006, 1:58pm

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boht khoob =) koyal jii !

P_GL · November 14, 2006, 2:34pm

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thats very nice:D

mahamkhan · November 15, 2006, 7:50am

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nice sharing....koyal gee

Sashak · November 15, 2006, 9:33am

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nice poetry

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · November 15, 2006, 11:53am

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Nice:-)

Prince_Ali · November 15, 2006, 4:21pm

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very nice :k:

WiseGuy · November 15, 2006, 7:45pm

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Nice.
Thank you for sharing.

NikamiJano · November 18, 2006, 2:37am

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:k:

reet · November 19, 2006, 5:11am

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**kis ki tareef maiN likhi ye ghazal kiya janoo
kis ko kehta hooN mohabat ka kanwal kiya janoo

maiN tu bas aik hi umeed maiN rahta hoon sada
us ko dekhoon jo nazrooN maiN merey rehta hai**

bahot khoob........Koyal ji.....thnx for this nice sharing........!

Amal · November 22, 2006, 1:07pm

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Very nice ghazal Koyal k: Thanx for sharing

Shab-e-Hijar · November 22, 2006, 10:25pm

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Nice one :k:

Koyal · November 26, 2006, 10:41pm

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shukria neechi nigha'haiN :)

Koyal · November 26, 2006, 10:42pm

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thanks bari wali bee :p

Koyal · November 26, 2006, 10:43pm

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thanks hH and sn :)

Koyal · November 26, 2006, 10:43pm

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:halo:

Koyal · November 26, 2006, 10:45pm

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thanks maham g :)