so i am again here ;-)
i don't know but i love this sher elagently romantic:~)
Ye khuley khuley sey gaisoo inheiN laakh tu sanwarey
merey haath sey sanwartey tou kuch aur baat hoti
Darna wuh mera neend kay amkaan say har pal
aur shaam dhalay khawab ki chahat mein bhi rehna
wuh khayal tha koi dhanak numa ya koi aks tha merey rubaru
jo mujhay har taraf sey tou laga wuh tu hi tha ya koi hubahu
bayaan mein ti wuh chashni keh mehak raha tha harf harf
jaesey khushbuoN ki zubaan mein koi kar raha ho guftugoo
Aahat thi kisi khaab ki ya doka tha nazar ka
ik pal ko sakoot toot geya dil ki qabar ka
aankhon ka sehan bheeg geya yadon ki nami sey
Okay I will write my comments also, so As our MOD is Nikami so let me help her :)
abhi tuk jin loogon nay apnay kihalat ka izhar kiya un kay naam aur the reason they have given that why they like poetry is as follows. reader who will not give reason but will write his fav. shair, his nick name will stay in " RED" :)
Amal
Reason :-
Pakeeza
Reason :-
anyway i like poetry bcoz they give us some message
Danke schön:~)
PS:- nicht so danken :)
aabla_pa
Reason :-
dil_ki_awaz
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Pramod
Reason :-
fara
Reason :-
**To be very frank and honest, since I have gained the true understanding of life, I have always felt hopeless about this world. I prefer being quiet and keeping it all locked inside. The couplet above very well describes my state of mind.
There is so much poetry that really touches my heart...
Why do I like it? Simply because I agree with Warsi Sahab's point of view. This entire ghazal is a complete description of what one should expect from life and how one should respond to it.**
PS:- abhi tuk jin loogon nay apnay kihalat ka izhar kiya un kay naam aur the reason they have given that why they like poetry is as follows. reader who will not give reason but will write his fav. shair, his nick name will stay in " RED"
Amal
Reason :-
PS:- accepted though not so convincing
Pakeeza
Reason :-
PS:- nicht so danken
aabla_pa
Reason :-
dil_ki_awaz
Reason :-
Pramod
Reason :-
fara
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Gul-e-Tasbeeh
Reason :- same as **Pakeeza! **using more than one nicks
tuba hai help kar k itna “itRa” keoN rahya haiN… mods becharooN ko aur paasey ve nazar rakhna parti wesay seriously apni jaga ap ka name day modetion k leay since my other partner may b sick and tired from my nikama’ness:(
thanks for the offer but Ji nahi, i dont want to be a MOD phir tu mujboori ho ga ye sub kurna and i dont want that, let me do it happily, no restrictions plz PLUS i will be too tough for these innocent guppies so i am not suitable for that.
but really it was a joke, i do know that both of you are working good to manage all this
so you yourself didnt tell why do you like poetry? and not many shairs from your diary
i have seen k bahut say loogoon ki diaries open ho raahin iss thread main, mine still closed
Kuj unj wi rahwaan okhiyan san
kuj gal wich ghum da touq wi si
kuj shehr dey log wi zalam san
kuj meinu maran da shouq wi si
yes its beautiful! i have heardly read poetry in Punjabi, laykin ye un main say hay jo sumagh a jaati k akhir kaha kiya ja raha hay....., couple of weeks ago u said something about pushtoo, so i thought may be you are pathan so anything in pushtoo u have? :)
If some one will ask me kay loogoon ko poetry kion aachi lugti, to be very honest, mayray kihaal main , Poetry sirf unhain aachi lugti jin kay dill main koi durd ho, Iqbal nay kaha tha
Mayray Ashaar Iqbal, kion piyare na hoon mug ko
Mayray tootay hovay dill kay ye durd angaiz naaly hain
ub yeh durd bahut si types ka ho sukta hay, we all know that kay koun koun si types ho suktin… so it is same with me. 2,3 types kay durd hain dill main kay poetry aachi lugti hay
way back in 1993… 13 years ago… uss time sirf shair hi aachay lugtay thay itna dehaan nahi hota tha kay poet ka naam bhi daykho kay koun hay
Itni shadeed baarishain ub kay buraas hoin
tootay hovay gavoon kay chuper bhi ro parye
aab-e-rawaan kay samnay peyasoon ko daykh kur
peyasoon ki baybusi pur sumander bhi ro parey
Phir ayk aur shair hay, I think Majid Sadeeqe ka
bahum nahi hain jo mosaum ki khunkiya Majid
tu kion na aankh ka aangun hi num kiya jaye
Nasir Kazmi ka ayk shair tha
Kantoon say khuch iss tour peyar kiya main nay
Phooloon kay tukbur ka bhuram toor dieya
Parveen Shakir ki jiss din death hoi thi, i guess 26th Dec 1994, first time i read her poetry… actually was preparing my Physics Exam tu 9:00 ki NEWs main pata chula, then i searched and got her few poems
Chaand
Ayk say musafir
Ayk sa muqader
Main zameen pur tanha
Aur wo asmaano main
Faiz ke kalaam meiN sey kuch selection.
**
Kabhi aarzu ke seharaa meiN aa ke ruktey heiN qaafley sey
wo saari baateiN lagaao ki si wo saarey unwaaN visaal ke se
nigah-o-dil ko qaraar kesa nishaat-o-gham meiN kami kahaN ki
wo jab miley heiN to un sey har baar ki hey ulfat naey sirey sey
**
Kabhi aarzu ke seharaa meiN aa ke ruktey heiN qaafley seywo saari baateiN lagaao ki si wo saarey unwaaN visaal ke senigah-o-dil ko qaraar kesa nishaat-o-gham meiN kami kahaN kiwo jab miley heiN to un sey har baar ki hey ulfat naey sirey sey
k:
mods becharooN ko aur paasey ve nazar rakhna parti wesay seriously apni jaga ap ka name day modetion k leay since my other partner may b sick and tired from my nikama’ness:(
tu 9:00 ki NEWs main pata chula, then i searched and got her few poems