Apney Gunahun pey Ek Nazer...

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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**Na Thi Jab Apnay Haal Ki Khabar **
**Dekhtay Rahay Logon K Aib-o-Hunar **

**Parri Jab Apnay Gunahoon Par Nazar **
**To Nigah Mein Koi Aur Bura Na Raha..!!

**:snooty:

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Re: Apney Gunahun pey Ek Nazer...

mujhe to yeh she'r Bahaadur Shaah "Zafar" ke is she'r kii naql yaa uskii TooTii phooTii soorat nazar aatii hai:
na thii Haal kii jab hameN apnii Khabar, rahe dekhte auroN ke ai'b o hunar
paRii apnii buraaiyoN pe jo nazar to nigaah meN koii buraa na rahaa

isii Haseen Ghazal kaa maqt'a mujhe bahot pasand hai aur is meN zabardast sabaq muzmir hai:
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"Zafar", aadmii usko na jaaniyegaa, ho vo kaisaa hii saaHib-e-fai'm_o_zakaa
jise ai'sh meN yaad e Khudaa na rahii, jise tai'sh meN Khauf-e-Khudaa na rahaa!!!**

kia zabardast she'r hai!!! :)

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Re: Apney Gunahun pey Ek Nazer…

naql ko churiye ye done pey issi ki copy ki hai :vivo:

matlab mera koi faida nahi huaa :snooty:…:stuck_out_tongue:

last sher bohut khoob hai :lajawab:taesh mae khaufey khuda na raha :lajawab:

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Re: Apney Gunahun pey Ek Nazer…

Dono shair fit hain:lajawab:

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Re: Apney Gunahun pey Ek Nazer…

Kahan kursi mae :smiley:

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Re: Apney Gunahun pey Ek Nazer…

zabardast :lajawab:

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Re: Apney Gunahun pey Ek Nazer...

dono ashar bohat zabardast hain,

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Re: Apney Gunahun pey Ek Nazer…

:nahi:

Pram mein

Jurwaan hain na

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Re: Apney Gunahun pey Ek Nazer…

Nice. :k: