apnay lahuu ki aag mein jalna para hamein

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

aabla_pa March 22, 2007, 9:14am 1

weeraana-e-wajood mein chalna para hamein
apnay lahuu ki aag mein jalna para hamein

manzil bohot hi door thi, rastay thay ajnabi
taaron k sath sath, nikalna para hamein

saaya misaal aaey thay us ki gali mein hum
dhalnay lagi jo shaam to dhalna para hamein

hum charhtay soorajon ko salaami na day sakay
so do-peher ki dhoop mein jalna para hamein

tha ibtida se ilm k hai raasta ghalat
or kaaflay k sath bhi chalna para hamein

AMJAD kisi taraf bhi sahaara na tha koi
jab gir gaey to khud hi sanbhalna para hamein

Aqls March 22, 2007, 9:33am 2

Re: apnay lahuu ki aag mein jalna para hamein

nice

SJ March 22, 2007, 10:06am 3

Re: apnay lahuu ki aag mein jalna para hamein

hum charhtay soorajon ko salaami na day sakay
so do-peher ki dhoop mein jalna para hamein

AMJAD kisi taraf bhi sahaara na tha koi
jab gir gaey to khud hi sanbhalna para hamein

bohat khoob!:)

NikamiJano March 22, 2007, 2:41pm 4

Re: apnay lahuu ki aag mein jalna para hamein

v nice :)

SunnyBoy March 22, 2007, 3:07pm 5

Re: apnay lahuu ki aag mein jalna para hamein

:k:

hiba_no.1 March 22, 2007, 5:04pm 6

Re: apnay lahuu ki aag mein jalna para hamein

bohut khoob

***lethal PLZ mere Bhai Bahn jao ***

Shab-e-Hijar March 22, 2007, 6:01pm 7

Re: apnay lahuu ki aag mein jalna para hamein

bohat khoob :k:

pk786 March 22, 2007, 6:05pm 8

Re: apnay lahuu ki aag mein jalna para hamein

tha ibtida se ilm k hai raasta ghalat
or kaaflay k sath bhi chalna para hamein

AMJAD kisi taraf bhi sahaara na tha koi
jab gir gaey to khud hi sanbhalna para hamein
v nice :)

aabla_pa March 23, 2007, 7:52am 9

Re: apnay lahuu ki aag mein jalna para hamein

Thanx

Gondal_007 March 24, 2007, 5:32am 10

Re: apnay lahuu ki aag mein jalna para hamein

zaberdust aabla_pa