Apnay honton pur

Pehli_Kiran · January 26, 2003, 4:14pm

Apnay honton pur sajana chahta hon
Aaa tujhay gun gunana chahta hon

Koi anso teray daman pur gir kur
Boond ko moti banana chahta hon

Thuk gaya mayn kartay kartay yaad tujh ko
Ab tujhay mayn yaad ana chahta hon

Chhaa raha hay sari basti mayn andhera
Roshni ho ghur jaalana chahta hon

Akhri hichki teray zanon pay aye
Maut bhi mayn shairana chahta hon

aadhoorighazal · January 26, 2003, 4:20pm

Re: Apnay honton pur

Thuk gaya mayn kartay kartay yaad tujh ko
Ab tujhay mayn yaad ana chahta hoon

very very beautiful..thanks kiran.

Dilsay · January 26, 2003, 4:52pm

Akhri hichki teray zanon pay aye
Maut bhi mayn shairana chahta hon

Ya nahi hoo sakta...................

XChorniX · January 26, 2003, 5:44pm

bohot achay :biggthumb

very nice sista, keep it up :k:

btw welcome to GupShup, hope u have a wonda ful time hea

happy postin

Capricorn · January 26, 2003, 5:55pm

Re: Apnay honton pur

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Pehli Kiran: *

Thuk gaya mayn kartay kartay yaad tujh ko
Ab tujhay mayn yaad ana chahta hon

[/QUOTE]

This one is great....last walee verse is a bit weird!!!

HeArT_HaCKeR · January 26, 2003, 6:03pm

beautiful :k:

Dragon_King · January 26, 2003, 6:04pm

very nice :k:

system · January 26, 2003, 6:15pm

nice one :k::k:

arifnawaz1 · January 26, 2003, 9:21pm

Us ke hontoo pe kuch kaanpta reh gaya
Aatay aatay mera naam sa reh gaya…
Woh mere saamne hi gaya aur mein
Raastay ki tarha dekhta reh gaya

Keep it up :k::k::k:

guybrush · January 26, 2003, 9:48pm

good one :k:

Pehli_Kiran · January 26, 2003, 9:53pm

arifnawaz u r back :~)

gooooood.