apnaa dil kabhee bhii cheer ke, oos shaksh ko dikhaa na saka

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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I am very new to this field. I just try to give words to my emotions. In this process I have always felt some difficulty in writting ghazals in long behar. This time I have tried. Let’s see how far I am from success. Aap sabon ke comments ka hamesha ki tarah intezaar rahega.

apnaa dil kabhee bhii cheer ke, oos shaksh ko dikhaa na saka
wo chala gayaa mujhe chhoD ke, aur maiN waapas bula na saka

na jameeN kabhee thamee yahaaN, na aasmaaN hii gira kabhee
na main hii mar gayaa dard se, oos ko bhii kabhee bhula na saka

ye kisi kii duaaoN ka asar hi tha, jo tu mil gaya sar e raah mujhe
main ne etna paa liya tere ishq meiN, kabhee haath phir uTha na saka

oose aaNdhioN ka shauq tha, mujhe oos mein choD ke chala gayaa
meri aankhoN mein etnii dhool jamee, main ashq bhii bahaa na saka

ye jag ki puraani reet hai, nahiN haath meiN kuchh mere sanam
jo daali shaakh se TuT gayee , oos pe phool koii khilaa na saka

kal toofaaN hii etna shadeed tha, main mauzoN meiN bhatakta rah gaya
ye chaand bhii woheeN mauzood tha, wo bhii mujhe bachaa na saka

wo munsif hi nahin mera yaar bhii hai, mujhe oos pe aitbaar bhii hai
par wo sazaa suna ke chalaa gaya, aur mera zurm bhii bataa na saka

mujhe oos ne etne zakhm diye, meri rooh bhii rahti hai Thakii huee
maine laakh koshisheN kar lii magar, apnii nazar se oose gira na saka

jab doobtii thi apnii kashti e ishq, wo safinaa choD ke chalaa gaya
kahte haiN saahil door na tha, lekin maiN raasta hii paa na saka

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Re: apnaa dil kabhee bhii cheer ke, oos shaksh ko dikhaa na saka

bohat he khobsurat gazal ** Pra g **

thanks 4 sharing

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boht achie ghazl hei:k:

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Re: Re: apnaa dil kabhee bhii cheer ke, oos shaksh ko dikhaa na saka

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*Originally posted by NikamiJano: *

bohat he khobsurat gazal ** Pra g **

thanks 4 sharing
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honsla afzaai ke liye shukriya, bahna.

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Thanks for liking it, Masoom Muskaan jii.

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bhut hi zaberdast :k:
bhut achiii gazal ha

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Re: apnaa dil kabhee bhii cheer ke, oos shaksh ko dikhaa na saka

Very nice Pramod:k: I think you have been quite
successful in controling the ghazal…keep it up :slight_smile:

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Beautiful :)

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very very Nice :k:
keep it up :slight_smile:

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bouhat khoob… kya kehny :k:

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wah ji wah
keep it up :)

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honsla afzaai ke liye shukriya, Nikki jii.

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Re: Re: apnaa dil kabhee bhii cheer ke, oos shaksh ko dikhaa na saka

zarra navaazii ke liye bahot bahot shukriya Amal. Your words always encourage me a lot.
thanks once again.

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honsla afzaai ke liye bahot bahot shukriya aap sabon ka GuL-e-Tasbeeh, Chand Chehra jii,ASA and mirinda.

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Re: Re: Re: apnaa dil kabhee bhii cheer ke, oos shaksh ko dikhaa na saka

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*Originally posted by Pramod: *

zarra navaazii ke liye bahot bahot shukriya Amal. Your words always encourage me a lot.
thanks once again.
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Pleasure is mine :)

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Re: apnaa dil kabhee bhii cheer ke, oos shaksh ko dikhaa na saka

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*Originally posted by Pramod: *
ye jag ki puraani reet hai, nahiN haath meiN kuchh mere sanam
jo daali shaakh se TuT gayee , oos pe phool koii khilaa na saka

kal toofaaN hii etna shadeed tha, main mauzoN meiN bhatakta rah gaya
ye chaand bhii woheeN mauzood tha, wo bhii mujhe bachaa na saka

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buhat khoob Pramod jee...

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Thanks Rameesha jii.