apna chaar din ka sath tha! sigh

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

chodhry January 25, 2004, 6:08am 41

Thank you Aceones! and Lajawab

Azad January 25, 2004, 2:03pm 42

abte’da’ey ka lekha kafi acha hay … baqi ka kuch din baad mian pharrain ge :k:

chodhry January 26, 2004, 9:36am 43

thanks Azad bhai. hope aap ko baqqi bhi pasand aaye gee.

chand_chera January 30, 2004, 11:51am 44

really nice and well thought poem :)

Code_Red January 30, 2004, 4:45pm 45

nice yaar :)

Keep it up

I have a slight problem that i like poetry but i like reading it in urdu text.
Roman urdu parh ke maza nahi ata our dair bhi ziada lagti hai :(

chodhry January 30, 2004, 8:14pm 46

Thank you Chand Chehra and Code_Red. per urdu likhn abhi tu mushkil kaam hey key board sey.

abc1234 March 19, 2004, 1:26pm 47

cha gae chodhry bhai very nice :k:

chodhry April 1, 2004, 1:10pm 48

thanks iram :)

chodhry January 31, 2005, 8:28pm 49

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This is the one.

system January 31, 2005, 9:51pm 50

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So what's the story behind it? :-)

It's a wonderful piece chodhry :-)

Very touchy... :(

Amal February 3, 2005, 5:28pm 51

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Beautiful work chodhry:k:…bohat pur’asr aur dil ko choo leney waali tehreer hey…khaas tor par pehla hissa…Keep it up

show_sha February 4, 2005, 2:13am 52

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:k:

chodhry January 16, 2007, 12:50pm 53

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KN: Thanks! Whole story is in the poem itself.
Show_sha: Thanks!

Amal: Thanks, Yaar tabiat khush ho jati hey terey comments deikh ker. :)

HeArT_HaCKeR January 16, 2007, 2:35pm 54

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^ ye aaj suraj kahan se nikla? :D

beautiful poem chodhry G.... keep sharing.... =))

chodhry January 27, 2007, 1:05pm 55

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Thanks HH, Aakhri itla'aat key mutabiq tu masriq sey hi nikla that albatta chand ney niklney sey serrey se hi inkaar ker diya that.

Amal January 29, 2007, 1:58pm 56

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SIRF 2 saal baad comment pe comment karney ka bohat bohat shukriya. Chodhry log to phir aesey hi hotey heiN na

chodhry January 31, 2007, 6:17am 57

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sorry yaaar Amal, qasam sey yaar fursat nahien thee bilkul bhi, abh kuch milli hey tu haazir ho gya hoon. baqqi jhaan tak chodhry honey ka taluq hey tu yaar choodhry hazzrat bhi dil aur doust rakhtey hein. :) aur yaar agar tere aur KN ki post na hoti tu shayed reply na karta. so ab yeh uddaasi chooru aur daant nikaal key dikhayoo achey bachoon ki terha. :D (aisey)

system January 31, 2007, 3:42pm 58

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It's nice to see you posting after such a long time... Sahi kaha hai kisi ne key oz ka aana jaana apni qad'r kho deta hai, par kabhi kabhaar aatey jaatey raha kareiN... It would be a great compliment to this forum :-)

chodhry January 31, 2007, 6:33pm 59

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KN, Thanks for the kind words.

Amal January 31, 2007, 11:56pm 60

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Theek hey chodhry saahab, aap kehtey heiN to haNsey detey heiN lekin aesa phir nahi hona chahiye :nono: