...Apna Bana Le Mujhko

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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apne haathon ki lakiron mein basaale mujhko
main huun tera naseeb apna bana le mujhko

mujhse tu poochne ayaa hai vafaa ke maani
ye teri saada dili maar na daale mujhko

khud ko main baant na daaluun kahi daaman-daaman
kar diya tuune agar mere havaale mujhko

waada phir waada hai main zahar bhi pi jaaun “Qateel”
shart ye hai koi baahon mein sambhale mujhko

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  • Qateel Shifai -

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Re: …Apna Bana Le Mujhko

:nono: :nono:** zahar** khudkushi haram hia ..:slight_smile:

mazak a part nice gazal thanks 4 posting

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hehehe thanks koyal jee :slight_smile:

aap itne detail mein padhte hi ghazals :blush:

waise life mein jo aapke saath hota hai agar wahi aapko kisi ghazal mein mile to bahot achchi lagti na…:slight_smile:

aapka bahot bahot shukriya :flower1:

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haan na is leay tu me har waqat gumsum nazar ati wesay hamra aik nick GumSum be tha :stuck_out_tongue: GS per nahi kisi aur jaga aur gazal ko detail se na parhi tu gazal ki toheen hoti na :slight_smile:

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humm

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Re: …Apna Bana Le Mujhko

:k: :flower1: :k:

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Ahmmm Ahmmmm… :rolleyes:

Nice one mate… :k: :flower1:

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nice one daghooooooo unlce :k:

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many thanks all :slight_smile:

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*apne haathon ki lakiron mein basaale mujhko *

very nice.....
thank you for sharing.

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very Nice :k::k:

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many thanks Vivo and Sana ji :slight_smile: :hug:

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nice1:k: