this is one another poem of my own. plz give comments.
** tere bicherne se faqat itna hua**
** aankh se ek aansoo tapqa…**
** aur main ne kho dya…**
** APNA AAP !!!**
by: SHAHRUKH SALEEM :halo:
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Keep it up and try to improve it
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very nice
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very nice n deep poem Shahrukh....keep writing....I really like short poems like this one.....way to go.....
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bohat he umda hamain to pasand aai hai bhai apki choti si laikin bohat kuch liye huay apnay andar yeh nazm keep writting :)
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very nice...!
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aap sab ka shukriya. main aisi hi aur iss se achi poems likhne ki koshish karoon ga. zaroor thank u all.