Apna Aap Ganwa Deta Hoon..

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

redidentity April 30, 2008, 10:22am 1

Meri Aik Ghazal,

Apna Aap Ganwa Deta Hoon
Teray Naghmay Ga Leta Hoon

Neend Safar Pe Jaatay Waqt
Tujh Ko Aik Sadaa Deta Hoon

Iss Daur Main Itnay Ghero’n Main
Tujh Sa Apna Paa Leta Hoon

Tanhai Main Soch Ke Tujh Ko
Apnay Paas Bula Leta Hoon

Saath Tera Paanay Ki Khaatir
Jhooti Qasmain Kha Leta Hoon

Her Dum Tujh Ko Sochta Hoon
Apna Aap Bhula Deta Hoon

Chaand Ko Bato’n Bato’n Main
Dil Ka Haal Suna Deta Hoon

(Ahmer)

Mujhe Umeed Hai Aap Logon Ko Pasand Aye Gi..

Regards,

Shumaisa April 30, 2008, 1:35pm 2

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wahh Ahmer Bohat khoob..

NikamiJano April 30, 2008, 2:09pm 3

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Beautiful red keep it up pata nahi tha k ap nikami k leay naghmay bhi gataey :p

Jhanjharewali April 30, 2008, 2:49pm 4

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Ahmer....bahot zabardast!! aap ko to bahot hunar hei, mashallah

redidentity May 3, 2008, 5:15am 5

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thnx alot Shumaisa

aww.. abb pata chal gaya na thnx jee

buhat shukria JJW jee

fizatiq May 3, 2008, 6:45am 6

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buhat zabardast.............ahmer app ki ek aur piyaree gazal perhnay main maza aaya ..............keep sharing...........

redidentity May 3, 2008, 6:51am 7

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aww.. thanks alot fiza for such appreciation :)

bheegiyaad May 3, 2008, 4:50pm 8

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jhoot bolna achee baat nahi hai chahay jab bhi bola jaey
ghazal iz nice :k: having a rhythm like song

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Shab-e-Hijar May 4, 2008, 6:06pm 9

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very nice ahmer :k: keep it up

redidentity May 6, 2008, 5:22am 10

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thanks bheegi ager song type rythm to kab ga rahay ho

thanks Shab jee

AQ May 6, 2008, 5:39am 11

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Itna kuch kar letaY ho? bha'ee wah.. Masha Allah... :-d

redidentity May 6, 2008, 6:08am 12

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Shab-e-Hijar May 6, 2008, 6:28am 13

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@ jee

redidentity May 6, 2008, 6:41am 14

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lolx.. Had hai.. seniors ke name se main jee lagata hoon :)

_Masoom_Muskaan May 6, 2008, 7:12am 15

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nice:k:

redidentity May 6, 2008, 7:27am 16

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thanks MM :)

I want to build a Haveli in Lahore. Is it possible?

Aryaan May 7, 2008, 10:25pm 17

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It’s Beautiful Ahmer..:k:

Dushwari May 8, 2008, 4:14am 18

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nice poem, Ahmer.

best,
Dushwari

redidentity May 8, 2008, 5:28am 19

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thanks alot Aryaan n Dushwari Jee :)

abeeha May 8, 2008, 5:52pm 20

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wow ji its awesome n very Beautiful n simple and and and................
dekha alfaaz hi khatam ho gae tareef k liye.