anyone with good Urdu skills and patience

Can someone give a gist of what this means, NOT stanza by stanza or line by line. A general gist, doesn’t have to be detailed. Muchas gracias.

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Beautiful:flower1:

this is always a wish of a muslim… to have a deedaar of Rasoolulah:saw:

What is said here (as far as I can understand with my very limited knowledge) is that poet apparently was attracted towards the teachings of Christianity and idolism even though poet is a muslim.. but since when he has an oppertunity to visit Madinah Munawwarah, he now knows how fake all other is and how weak this worldly glamour is infront of true teaching of Rasoolualh:saw:

Kaash! Aaa jaaye ussay Jalwah numaaie kaa khiyaal
Jiss kay Deedaar kee Wehshat hai Tamanna Mujh ko

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ahaan.

Thank you, Anwaar. That is quite beautiful Masha’Allah.

His name was Wahshat; at the end of a long line of verses, in one of the couplets, he would put his name. i know there’s a technical Urdu word for it, starts with ‘meem’, can’t remember it now. So after several verses, there is one couplet (as in the one you quoted) where his name ‘wahshat’ always comes.

Anyways, thank you for helping me to understand it. :flower1: :flower1:

"Takhallus" (either part of name or any nick other than name) is used in "Maqta" which is normally the last shair....

however, he has used it uniquley twice using it at the last shair of each part ..

oops :blush: i meant Takhallus, it starts with a tay not a meem :smiley:

hey if i post more of his work (don’t worry, not today but maybe some other day), would you translate that for me as well - not in a detailed manner, general gist of it like you did above? The rest i can figure out on my own as long as someone points me in the correct beginning direction. He received some amazing positive reviews from Hali and Iqbal… i can post up those if you want.

It’s just that i really want to understand his work much better and i can’t right now. That’s really frustrating for me. He was fluent in both Urdu and Farsi. Anywho, thanks Anwaar - i really appreciate this.

I will try my best…

Iqbal and Haali are my favorites too… never read Wehshat before but seems like quite a nice one…

I will try my best whatever i can do (IF I COULD DO) :slight_smile:

waisay as Iqbal said:

Teray zameer par jub tuk naa ho Nuzool-e-Kitaab
Girah kusha hai, naa Raazi, naa Saahib-e-Kasshhaaf

in order to understand such things, we need to understand the tone of the poet :flower1:

:flower1: In order to even understand the tone of the poet, one has to begin somewhere - even if it is a very, very small place to begin. As the Chinese put it, a journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step :flower1:

i appreciate your offer :flower1: :slight_smile: i won’t post up more of his work right now, i would have to scan it first. But thank you so much for agreeing in principle :flower1: i appreciate that.

agreed :flower1: I was not saying any thing contradictory to that:flower1: after all, we developed to learn all this from places like schools where teachers showed us the first step:flower1:

PS: :flower1: :smiley:

Thank you Both… :flower1: :flower2:

Nice :flower1: Nadia thanx for sharing

Anwaar bhai thanx for explation :flower1:

Naida H

Y dont u try to learn urdu. I mean there is a sea of liturature in Urdu which u r missing . I dont think it will be much difficult for u.

today i have received a message from some one
my desire, itself, congratulates me for this
the attraction of the temple and church pulled me
but one signal directed me towards the Haram (Makka)
why should not that desert be my desired destination
of which every thorn is refreshing for me
i have taken my eyes away from the sights of the world
whose sight do i desire my Lord?
i keep traveling towars the place of my beloved
my heart's crave keeps driving me on
my eye's unrest is a cue for something
i'll soon be witnessing someone's bright face
o! i wish he thinks of exposing himself
seeing whom i so desire Wehshat (poet refering to himself)

why should my heart be saddened by worries of life
who is caught in your love why should he worry of religion and world
if you do not care for those who wish to see you
then why is each of your action so loveable
how should then a true lover show his love?
how should an unbeliever's heart be wary of the love?
the pride of beauty has given you lesson of ignorance
why should my request for seeing you get any attention
when i myself do not care for criticizing others Wehshat
whats wrong with others, why should they criticize me

^ lovely :)
thanx guys

That’s a really nice translation Mughal…Great job…:k:

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Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful. Thank you SO much, Armughal. i really appreciate your typing that all out in English for my benefit. Thank you so very very much :flower1: Really appreciate it.

Moonstar, sigh i know.

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Then ????