na jii bhar ke dekhaa na kuchh baat kii
ba.Dii aarazuu thii mulaaqaat kii
ka_ii saal se kuchh Khabar hii nahii.n
kahaa.N din guzaaraa kahaa.N raat kii
ujaalo.n kii pariyaa.N nahaane lagii.n
nadii gunagunaa_ii Khayaalaat kii
mai.n chup thaa to chalatii havaa ruk ga_ii
zubaa.N sab samajhate hai.n jazbaat kii
sitaaro.n ko shaayad Kahbar hii nahii.n
musaafir ne jaane kahaa.N raat kii
ooh thats nice one Nia… main nay tu issay aaj daykha hay…
well as usual… BB ki choice…Excelent…
aur yeh Nia is called Miss DillWali.. BB ??
acha…
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Zindgi Humain Aazmaaati rahi…Hum Issay Azmaaty rahy
kanch ke surkh chori
mere hath me
aj ase kankane lage
jese kal rat shabnam se likhe hoe
tere hatho ke shokiyo ko
hawao ne sar de dia ho
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This is a good enjoyment, and shows that u have a real interests in Ghazals.
Hum nay kantoon ko bhi narmi say chhoa hay aksar
loog bay dard hain pholoon ko masal daitay hain
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Na jaany kis adaa sy liya toony mera naam
Dunya samajh rahi hy ky sab kuch tera hoon meen
“noon”
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With Love:
Only that person worth your tears, who never made u cry!
Bewaqoof! first letter of the last word! no-wonder the thread stopped…what i’m gona do is skip your reply and carry on from waseem … theek hai na… so that’s “h”
…ok…
HOOR THI WOH JANNAT KI,YA DOZAKH KI AAG,
DIL JALAA KAR CHALI GAYI, NA CHORA KOYI SURAG..
next-post “s” se shuru hona chahiye, ok.
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sarakti jaye hai rukh se naqaab ahista ahista
nikalta aa raha hai aftaab ahista ahista . . .
[This message has been edited by BholiBhali (edited April 29, 2001).]
Degas
April 29, 2001, 8:45pm
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aaye kuchh abr kuchh sharaab aaye
us ke baad aaye jo azaab aaye
baam-e-miinaa se maahataab utare
dast-e-saaqii me.n aaftaab aaye
har rag-e-Khuu.N me.n phir charaaGaa.N ho
saamane phir wo benaqaab aaye
umr ke har waraq pe dil ko nazar
terii meher-o-wafaa ke baab aaye
kar rahaa thaa Gam-e-jahaa.N kaa hisaab
aaj tum yaad behisaab aaye
na gaii tere Gam kii saradaarii
dil me.n yuu.n roz inqalaab aaye
jal uThe bazm-e-Gair ke dar-o-baam
jab bhii ham Khaanamaa.N_Kharaab aaye
is tarah apanii Khamashii guu.Njii
goyaa har simt se jawaab aaye
'Faiz' thii raah sar basar ma.nzil
ham jahaa.N pahu.Nche kaamayaab aaye
FAMA
April 29, 2001, 11:02pm
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hi !!!!!!
aa jao kay tum ko tarsay hai ab nazar
dekah nahi hai hum nay bahut din guzar gaye
ok see u soon bye 4 now
ALWAYS BE HAPPY
NEVER BE SAD
Gham-e-aashiqi se kah do raah-e-aam tak na pohnche
mujhe khauf hai yeh tohmat mere naam tak na pohnche
maiN nazar se pee rahaa thaa to yeh dil ne bad-duaa di
teraa haath zindagii bhar kabhi jaam tak na pohnche
phele tu apne dil ke raz jan jaye
phir jo nigah-e-yar kahee wo man jaye
phelel mijaz rah-e-guzar jan jaye
phir gard-e-rah jo bhe kahee wo man jaye
kuch keh rahe hai ap ke sene ke dharkane
mere sune to dil ka khaha man jaye
ak dhoop se jame hai nigao ke as pas
yeh ap hai to ap pe kurban jaye
shayad hazoor de koi nisbat hame bhe ho
anko me jhank kar hame phelcahn jaye
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“j”
sofi u sure got a good choice
amjad kuch likho bhe
jab bhi tanhayii se ghabraa ke simat jaate haiN
ham terii yaad ke daamaN se lipat jaate haiN
uN pe tuufaaN ko bhii afsos huaa kartaa hai
vo safine jo kinaaroN pe ulat jaate haiN
"H"
HUKUM HUDA KA HAI..TUM USSI KI BANDAGI KARO,
EH ZAAHID NA ISHK-E-DUNIYA MAIN..BARBAD ZINDAGI KARO!
"K"
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kabhii yuuN bhii to ho
dariyaa kaa saahil ho
puure chaand kii raat ho
aur tum aao
kabhii yuuN bhii to ho
suunii har manzil ho
koyii na mere saath ho
aur tum aao
kabhii yuuN bhii to ho
tanahaayii ho, dil ho
buundeN ho, barsaat ho
aur tum aao
"A"
apne dil ke bate likhta rehta hon
rat gaye tak me ghazle likhta rehta hon
muj se mukhatab hote hai jo sham dhale
un ankho ko sahme likhta rehta hon
jin shocho me apne mehbob ke yad na ho
un ko fakat me likhta rehta hon
chupke chupke shakh hawa par akhar shab
tere mehki sanse likhata rehat hon
bin kajal bhee jin me kajil bat kare
kaghaz par wo ankhe likhta rehata hon
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“h”
milli
April 22, 2006, 5:49am
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Re: Antakshiri of ghazals/sher
ARZ KIYA HAI
"ISHQ KARNE KAI BHI KUCH AADAB HOWA KARTE HAI,
JAGTHI ANKHO MAIN BHI KHUWAB HOWA KARTE HAI,
HAR KOI RO KAR DIKAE ZARORI NAHI,
KHUSHK ANKHOON MAIN BHI SELAB HOWA KARTE HAI"
Re: Antakshiri of ghazals/sher
my goodness this is a 5 year old thread!!
milli
April 23, 2006, 10:34am
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Re: Antakshiri of ghazals/sher
yeah... 5 YR OLD !