-- Ansoon ki Aab-Beeti ...

ATA · April 21, 2011, 4:05am

Ansoon ki Aab-Beeti

chalak parhnay ko har lamha wo tayyar tha
sab kay dard ko apnay hi dil main saja gaya

kaha, suna , daikha aur dil ko baytaab kargaya
dard barhnay laga aur dil nay dil ko hi faraag kia

apnay lahu ko nichor kar dil ko kuch kushada kia
kochay-e-dil say ruswa lahu, pani pani hogaya

ankhon nay jo yeh daika to bardasht na howa
aab-e-lahu ko us nay kia khud hi aakhri salam

wo baywafa ik pal main aisay sath chor gaya
deed ki kokh say chalaka, rota usay chor gaya

gir kar wo zameen main ik khusho si bikhra gaya
apnay peechay bas dilfishan nishaan wo chor gaya

by: Shair-e-magrib jinaab Ata Khan sahib Karachvi

  (April 20, 2011)

ATA · April 21, 2011, 4:10am

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aik choti si sazish ki hay ap logon ko tarpaanay ki, ummed hay kamyaab o kamraan hojaoonga ...
na howa to khush hojana, aur agar kamyab howa to us ki paishgi maafi...

shukriaa... ba nafse nafees khud

ghazal_kisi_ke · April 21, 2011, 4:40am

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I like it! Daad qabool keejyay. :-)

Amarbail · April 21, 2011, 5:55am

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Behtareen kavish hai ATA …:k:

btw this should goez to the Shora-e-Gupshup … isnt’ it ?

Amarbail · April 21, 2011, 5:56am

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Good to see you back GKK ... :)

_Masoom_Muskaan · April 21, 2011, 6:58am

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maza nai aya bhai

waleedhbk · April 21, 2011, 8:26am

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ATA · April 21, 2011, 9:51pm

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Ghazal… you!!!.. kahan ap chanda? long time… infact I came after some time too
ok, why did you like it ?

Thank you Amarbail, how are you? and kavish nahi sazish thi yeh
yep it should be in shoraegupshup, lekin main shora nahi hoon na :s

thora sa achaar mila kay khao, maza aajaiga

parha bhi ya bass

ATA · April 21, 2011, 9:52pm

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**MODS:

can you move it to other section please?

**

ATA · April 22, 2011, 3:34pm

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hmm this thread is still not moved, It means no mod gives a bridge, they dont read and they dont care what is posted and what is asked!? ... amazing! ?

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · April 22, 2011, 4:03pm

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**Mods bhi insan haiN..unki apni bhi masroofiyaat hoti haiN.. :~) aap nay khud wahaN open karna tha na

baaqi ye nazm hai ya ghazal haaN..? behr , qafiya radeef ?**

ATA · April 22, 2011, 4:31pm

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main yeh baat nahi kehta agar masroof mods ko isi section main post kartay na daikhta… and of course I opened here but then I also asked them to move it.. lekin shayad masroofoat ziada hogi… meri galti k mujhay aisa laga jaisay wo ignore kar rahay hon…

hmm… na to yeh nazam hay, na ghazal, na qawwali… yeh falsafa hay (jp samjh na aayay wo falsafa hay )
agar koi aur expert issay kuch name daina chahain to shoq say deejiay… blushed

Good Bye