another request...

Sehar · May 18, 2003, 8:50pm

Aslaamualaikum,

I hope everyone is doing fine. Aap sub se ye guzarish karni thii ke agar aap apni shairee post kareiN tou please leave your name at the end. That way it makes it much easier for me to know who’s posting their own poetry so it can be considered in the piece of the month selection, waisay bhi baqi members ko bhi pata chall jaey ga ke it’s your own.

Shukriya.

ghazal_kisi_ke · May 18, 2003, 9:00pm

i agree with you:k:

Galaxy · May 18, 2003, 10:42pm

ahan..........i'll take that in consideration.:)

Gadha · May 19, 2003, 2:17am

yeh garchay mera sher nahiN hay:halo:
iss maiN magar mera naam nahiN hay:D

—Gadha:blush:

Adaab arz hay:smack:

Dilsay · May 19, 2003, 4:41am

I always did that but never was considered... :( i will keep doing it may be in future you might like my writing... :)

Lamhay · May 19, 2003, 3:47pm

agreed!

Black_Mamba · May 20, 2003, 2:02am

Whats "piece of the month"
sorry if its a stupid question. :d I can guess what it actually would be, but dont know exactly :)

Eastern_Thoughts · May 20, 2003, 4:22am

:rolleyes::rolleyes::rolleyes:

U read posts?

Swera · May 20, 2003, 4:33am

I allways do:)

Sehar · May 20, 2003, 5:18am

Yes, Eastern Thoughts, I do read posts :) Reply na karouN tou iss ka ye matlab nahi hota hai ke i don't read. As you know it's a busy world out there, i do what i can. :)

BrokenSky · May 20, 2003, 2:06pm

Agreed:k:…

koiDost · May 20, 2003, 4:36pm

I agree with u ~Sehar~ !!!

Amarbail1 · May 20, 2003, 6:55pm

Sehar

I am awaiting your reply (pmsg)... !

Eastern_Thoughts · May 20, 2003, 8:24pm

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by ~Sehar~: *
Yes, Eastern Thoughts, I do read posts :) Reply na karouN tou iss ka ye matlab nahi hota hai ke i don't read. As you know it's a busy world out there, i do what i can. :)
[/QUOTE]

haan ji tusi tay wadday loog hoo ji :) khair mayra keya hay , main tu maan hi layta hoon....., but khuch aur loog bhi aysa hi soochtay hian, prove it wrong with ur actions ;)

Zakhmi_Umar · May 23, 2003, 7:32am

Re: another request...

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by ~Sehar~: *
Aslaamualaikum,

I hope everyone is doing fine. Aap sub se ye guzarish karni thii ke agar aap apni shairee post kareiN tou please leave your name at the end. That way it makes it much easier for me to know who's posting their own poetry so it can be considered in the piece of the month selection, waisay bhi baqi members ko bhi pata chall jaey ga ke it's your own.

Shukriya. :)
[/QUOTE]

Jee bilkul sahi kaha aap ne ,

Phool Tu Phool Hai Phool Tu Khile Ga
Bari Garmi Hai Ek Skanjwi ka Glass mile ga

ye mera sher nahi hai kahien suna thah

Skanjwi samjhte hien na aap ( Water with Lemon )

Golden_Scorpion · May 30, 2003, 10:38am

Plz Meray Liye Duaa KaraiN ke MaiN iss kaabil Ho JaooN Ke
Nazam Ke Neechay Apna Naam Likh SakooN :D

sagarjeeurs · June 3, 2003, 2:56pm

Re: Re: another request…

Zakhmi sahib

Perhaps u just have thought that u r in the Market and requesting for some hawker to give me a glass of water with Lemon but instead of this u r in the rationale groups of personalities and u should to take after a sensible think and hope u will follow the valueable request in all matters.

Zakhmi_Umar · June 4, 2003, 4:54am

Re: Re: Re: another request…

Sagar sb mien ne ye sher is liye post nahi kiya k mujhe skanjwi ka glass hi diya jaye , ye tu mien ne apne dostoon ko hasane k liye post kiya thah agar ab aap k mind hawker aur market aur sara naqsha aa jaye tu kuch keh nahi sakta , any how thank for valuable comments , sir jee aaap ki koi comments aise bhi hote hien jo valuable na hoon.

Azad · June 4, 2003, 6:11am

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Golden_Scorpion: *
Plz Meray Liye Duaa KaraiN ke MaiN iss kaabil Ho JaooN Ke
Nazam Ke Neechay Apna Naam Likh SakooN :D
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Inshallah

_SiLvErSpHiNx · June 6, 2003, 2:38am

What about english poetry everybody?