another poem by me..

ghazal_kisi_ke · August 13, 2004, 5:08am

pyara sa dost thankeww ..

Azad ..

Shaheed-e-Arzoo i wrote poem in the sense of a Nazam:p .. khair well its a nazam now:p .. and yeah i forgot to say that the sher ur said was very nice :k: ..

Capricorn · August 14, 2004, 11:07am

Re: another poem by me..

GKK, you are going good, girl :k:

ghazal_kisi_ke · August 15, 2004, 2:48am

cappppp thankewwww so muchhh

Ps: where have u been?? .. atay raha karo:-) ..

DADDU · August 16, 2004, 5:33pm

bauhat acha likha hai aap ne,

jab kisi ki ho ghzala to na likho aaisi ghazal
jis kisi ki bhi gazal ho wo bhala ab kia likhey

ghazal_kisi_ke · August 17, 2004, 2:11am

^^ thankeww very much .. n very nice:-) ..

chodhry · August 18, 2004, 2:40pm

Very creative thought. I like it. keep it up and keep sharing :k:

Golden_Scorpion_1 · August 25, 2004, 8:35am

WOW..

Zabardast…

Nice one… GKK

Dilsay · August 28, 2004, 10:00pm

Khush rahoo

Black_Mamba · August 29, 2004, 2:33pm

The Thought :k: The Theme :k: The Setting :k: all Too Good.

Just a lil wanting in the meter handling. But it sure is one of the best that I have seen here.

PS: its just my opinion, dont take it serious.

SunnyBoy · August 29, 2004, 4:44pm

:k:

fariha81 · August 29, 2004, 10:15pm

to
aik pal kahray ho kar
itna souchna k tum bilkul
aisay he aik zinda jism
ko marnay chor ayay ho

Aaj kal ke log bhee ajeeb hain unhein boora ker ke bhee kutch yaad nai ata..

NICE POEM/GHAZAL

ghazal_kisi_ke · August 31, 2004, 7:58am

chodhry thankewww .. ..

Golden Scorpion thankeww so muchhh .. flower ..

Dilsay thankeww apka bhi .. ..

Black Mamba awww thankeww so muchh for ur words .. .. meanz a lot to me .. n dont worry .. all opinions are most welcome:-D .. so thankewww once again .. n next time ill consider ur point too .. ..

SunnyBoy thankewww .. ..

fariha81 thankewwww .. .. btw whats "boora" .. sorry i didnt get that ..

** once again thankeww everyone ** .. ..