another 5 min ghazal

:cb:

OKay i came to check if someone replied in my 2 min nazam but since there was no one i thought i will write a 5 min ghazal this time :cb: so here it is…please throw ur jotay & timator on me :blush:

shararat bhari nighahon se

shararat bhari nighahon se
is tarha kia tartay hu
begunah is mazloom ko
is tarha kiun martay hu
yahi harkat hum jo kertay tu
dant jhapat aur jhaartay hu
apnay matlab ke baad tu tum
raddi samajh ke jhartay hu
ajab ada tumhari bhi ha jana
izhar-e-muhabat me bhi dhartay hu
mar jata hun chubhti nazar se
is tarha jab, mujh pe garhtay hu
jaan jati ha meri kasam se
jab khud ko mujh pe wartay hu

:bravo:

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tamatar and jootian nehi
but :rose: :flower1:

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Zabardast :k:

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:tamatarr:

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[QUOTE]
ajab ada tumhari bhi ha jana
izhar-e-muhabat me bhi dhartay hu

[/QUOTE]

lolzzzzz kuch log waqye aisai hotay hain hahah

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:what:…:yukh:…:nook::tamatarr:

PS: :clap:

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Jony bhaii shai’r k roop mein :k: wah wah! nice one :slight_smile:

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main to sahee sey smajh he naheen payeen........
roman urdu mushkil hai samajhna........

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Sara_87,
I have translated it for you:

Please do not look at me with naughty eyes.
Please do not beat up this innocent and oppressed person.
If I did the same thing to you, you would be yelling at me.
After you had used me for your purposes you are kicking me away like waste paper.
You are so naive that you are scared to tell me that you love me.
You are killing me with your piercing eyes.
I swear that I will die if you will be nice with me.

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after i read the english version…i went & read the urdu version again…which now i understood…
so now i can say"thaaliyaan for jony":clap:

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i forgot to say .....
thnx sleplessin america for ur translation.....it helped me understand wht jony wrote..........though urdu version main zyaada depth thee..........

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awww

jhony :p yeh kis sahiba ke liey lika hai lagta hai GF mil gai 15 dino ke liye ?

very good

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What about my thaaliyaan, I had to spend 2 days looking in the dictionary for the right words to use for translation so that the real spirit of the ghazal by jony does not get damaged ?
:slight_smile: :slight_smile:

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I guess I was too quick , thanks Sara for thanks.

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aaawww....tht is so sweet of u....u spend 2 days looking for the right words...........:)

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Had nothing to do at the office.
:)

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very bad.......office main bajaye kaam karney key u were doing tht...........

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It is not my job to keep me busy , it is my boss's job to keep me busy. My work is like a firefighers work , sometimes I am busy as hell sometimes nothing to do for days.
But I love my job. Not complaining , I am thankfull to Allah that I have this job, have a nice boss and work for a good company.

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ab jony akay hum dono ke pitayee kareyingey…unki thread humney jo spoil ker dee…
i dont want :tamatarr:from him

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lol it's kinda funnie