Anmool hain mooti

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Ye piyar hay iss ki qeemat na lagavo loogoon
Ye khawab hay, tabeer na mangoo loogoon

Ye apna piyar tu ayk udass shub hay
Sahar ki duva na do
Kay sahar hoi tu
Mahrbaan saaf daykhai dain gay

Wo jis ki ayk hunsi kay budlay
Apni khushion ko waar dain hum
Uss ki aankh say bahty mooti
Sumandroon main bah na jaain

Ye mooti anmool hain bahny say bucha lo loogoon
Ye piyar hay iss ki qeemat na lagavo loogoon

PS:- Amal, i got a question. its okay that i write all this jo bhi mind main aata, sometimes sense bunti hay sometimes nahi, but what sort of poetry it is, na tu aazad nazam hay , na poem, na ghazal. kahain main koi new chees tu ayjaad nahi kur raha :slight_smile:

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Re: Anmool hain mooti

nice

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Re: Anmool hain mooti

''Wo jis ki ayk hunsi kay budlay
Apni khushion ko waar dain hum
Uss ki aankh say bahty mooti
Sumandroon main bah na jaain''

kya baat hay janab Very nice BB last line kuch aur sochein samndaron mein kaesey bah saktey aankhon kay moti :~)

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Re: Anmool hain mooti

:slight_smile: wo shair ye kahna chahta hay na kay uss nay ro ro kay sumander bha diye hain aur ub un ki ankhoo kay mooti bhi uss main shamil na ho jaain. makes sense? :blush:

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Re: Anmool hain mooti

As long as you and we are enjoying it, everthing goes :slight_smile: Keep it up Amjad bhai :slight_smile:

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Re: Anmool hain mooti

auR jab ye moti samandaR maiN giRay gha tu sp buN jaiey gha..

v nice new shoRa ka ab aik department hona chaiey :slight_smile:

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Re: Anmool hain mooti

Okay.... , chulain aap kahtay hain tu i dont ask Questions :)

Pak V SL - Third Test Match
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Re: Anmool hain mooti

kiya bun jaaye ga? :halo:

new department tu new jobs :smiley: