!!!!!~ankhain~!!!!!

chand_chehra · July 31, 2003, 3:20am

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bharkaye meri pyaaS ko aksar teri ankhain
sehra mera chehra hai , samandar teri ankhaiN

phir kon bhala dad-e-tabasam inhay daygA
roye gi bohat mujh say bichar kar teri ankhaiN

** khali jo huwi sham-e-gareeban ki hatheli
kya kya na lutati rahien gohar teri ankhaiN**

bojhal nazar atien hain bazahir mujhay lakin
khulti hain bohat dil main utar kar teri ankhaiN

** ab tak meri ankho say mitaye nahi mittA
bhegi huwi sham ka ek manzar teri ankhaiN**

mumkin ho to taza ghazal ek aur bhi kahlo
phir orrh na lain khuwaab ki chadar teri ankhain

main sung sift ek hi rastay par khara ho
shaied mujhay dekhay gi palat kar teri ankhaiN

yo dekhtay rahna isay accha nahi “Mohsin”
woh kanch ka paikar hai to pathar meri ankhaiN

amirbilal · July 31, 2003, 3:54am

aankhain ghazal hain aap ki

BeWaQooF · July 31, 2003, 4:02am

Very Well Said By Mohsin Jazbi

Nice Ghazal

10x 2 Share With Us :)

Hawkeye · July 31, 2003, 6:32am

Re: !!!!!~*ankhain~*!!!!!

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by chand_chehra: *

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yo dekhtay rahna isay accha nahi "Mohsin"
woh kanch ka paikar hai to pathar meri ankhaiN
[/QUOTE]

Beautiful choice and beautiful presentation ... You have nice taste. Thanks for sharing.

Anchaal · July 31, 2003, 7:10am

khoob intekhab :~)

Amal · July 31, 2003, 1:12pm

Re: !!!~ankhain~!!!

Lovely ghazal CC:k:…thanx for sharing.

ASA · July 31, 2003, 2:01pm

wah… bouhat khoob… really nice :k:

system · July 31, 2003, 2:16pm

nice1 :k::k:

chand_chehra · July 31, 2003, 3:14pm

well the poet its Mohsin Naqvi not jazbi

chand_chehra · July 31, 2003, 3:15pm

thanks guyz for liking it

HeArT_HaCKeR · July 31, 2003, 3:55pm

nice..:k:

guybrush · July 31, 2003, 5:26pm

goodie :k:

Pramod · July 31, 2003, 6:06pm

Let me admit once again..
YOUR CHOICE IS EXCELLENT , ** CHAND JII **

Thanks for sharing....

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · July 31, 2003, 7:36pm

Amazing, kyaa AankhaiN haiN :D

thanks for sharing Chanda :-)

Koyal · July 31, 2003, 7:53pm

Re: !!!!!~*ankhain~*!!!!!

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by chand_chehra: *

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bharkaye meri pyaaS ko aksar teri ankhain
sehra mera chehra hai , samandar teri ankhaiN

phir kon bhala dad-e-tabasam inhay daygA
roye gi bohat mujh say bichar kar teri ankhaiN

** khali jo huwi sham-e-gareeban ki hatheli
kya kya na lutati rahien gohar teri ankhaiN**

bojhal nazar atien hain bazahir mujhay lakin
khulti hain bohat dil main utar kar teri ankhaiN

** ab tak meri ankho say mitaye nahi mittA
bhegi huwi sham ka ek manzar teri ankhaiN**

mumkin ho to taza ghazal ek aur bhi kahlo
phir orrh na lain khuwaab ki chadar teri ankhain

main sung sift ek hi rastay par khara ho
shaied mujhay dekhay gi palat kar teri ankhaiN

[/QUOTE]

nice one chand g waqie zabardast terI ankhin ;)

!!!!!*~*ankhain*~*!!!!!