MERYA LIYE THEEN KABHEE ASHQ BAAR WOH ANKHEN
NASHA THa JIN MAIN, AIK AISA KHUMAAR WOH ANKHEN
UTHAIN TOA KERTEE THEE APNA SHIKAAR WOH ANKHEN
JHUKAIN TOA HO JAIN MOHLIK HUTHYAAR WOH ANKHEN
JAFA KARAIN TOA LAGAIN AIK KAMAAN WOH ANKHEN
WAFA PAY AAIN TOA MERI AMAAN WOH ANKHEN
MAY UNHEE ANKHON KEE BAY- GAN- GEE KA MARA HON
MAY TAIZ BEHTAY HOUYE ANSOO_ON KA DHARA HON
show_sha
yaar showsha
ur good but u shud have used a girls nick.u wud have received a greater response.
Minerva
September 25, 2004, 5:54pm
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As usual achi koshish hai, Show Shaw. :–)
Karakush, thats absurd. Who gave you the idea that people would have appreciated him more and he would have got more responses here if his nick was a that of a girl or a bit feminine for that matter.
KARAKUSH for u yara!
BHAREE BAZAM MAIN RAAZ KEE BAAT KEH DEE
BARA BAY ADAB HON SAZA CHATA HON :P
n thnx MINrva ji.....aap kee appreciation ka aap kee muhabbat ka
Very nice and keep writing!