Andaz

Aalhan · July 22, 2002, 3:46am

DalanooN meiN kamroaN meiN uljha~ay hoay rakhna
Kuch kaam meiN apnay ko behla~ay hoay rakhna

Duniya kay masa~il meiN uljha hoa jab aaoN
Tum ghar kay masa~il ko suljha~ay hoay rakhna

Sandooq kay kaprooN ko kuch dhoop dikha dayna
Tum sehen meiN jaray ko phaila~ay hoay rakhna

MaiN dhoop kay sehra say jhulsa hoa aaoN ga
ShanooN pay ghata~ooN ko tehra~ay hoay rakhna

Ho ja~aiN kabhi shab meiN bhi bachooN say do baat~aiN
PariyooN ki kahani ko dohra~ay hoay rakhna

Dhundla na kaheeN kar day kuch ghar ki paraishani
Aaina~e~rukh apna chamka~ay hoay rakhna

Aik umr pay bhi os ka andaz vohi ~Anjum~
Kamray meiN qadam rakhna sharma~ay hoay rakhna

SunnyBoy · July 22, 2002, 8:05am

Nice.

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X_Communist · July 22, 2002, 10:59am

Sweet.

_kashish · July 22, 2002, 11:18am

MaiN dhoop kay sehra say jhulsa hoa aaoN ga
ShanooN pay ghata~ooN ko tehra~ay hoay rakhna

very nice

Amal · July 22, 2002, 1:02pm

What a ‘domestic’ ghazal

…
very nice

…thanx for sharing

MeiN pal do pal ka shaer hooN…

Aalhan · July 22, 2002, 5:42pm

Thanks :~) for liking it

Rameesha · July 22, 2002, 7:32pm

[quote]
Originally posted by Aalhan:
**MaiN dhoop kay sehra say jhulsa hoa aaoN ga
ShanooN pay ghata~ooN ko tehra~ay hoay rakhna

**
[/quote]

nice ... thanks for sharing

Tassneef · July 24, 2002, 2:56am

beautiful

yeh teen ashaar bemisaal haiN