And when she closed her eyes.....

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And I Miss You

Not a day goes by
That I don’t think about you
Every morning I wake
I wish you were here too
I miss that nice white smile
That bright and cheerful face
I even miss you open arms
Where there was lots of space
I miss those *****y evenings
When all we did was fight
Those quarrels over everything
When you were always right......

To be continued .....
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You and I

I remember you stood on the steps,
Gazing down at me.
I stopped and looked into your eyes,
Lost my breath suddenly.
I flushed under your scrutiny,
But what else could I do?
And like a child I realized
The TRUTH - I really did love you.
So powerful, So Gentle,
At times I wonder how?
I let this image come to me,
Of a Girl I don't know now.

Loving is so short and forgetting so long.
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My Dearest ...

This river leads from dark to light
So we must say adieu my friend
But if my ship sails from your sight
It does not mean my journey ends
It only means that the river bends
And if the world is really round as they say
Then my love we'll meet again someday.
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Re: And when she closed her eyes…

zindagi ke sitam, Itne kyun hai sanam
na hasuun na mai ro sakuun
mai tere bin ab jee na sakuun

o hum to chale the vahaan
jahan the tere kadmon ke nishaan
mai fir bhi na mil sakuun…

Jaan, I miss you…

Zindagi Ke Sitam.mp3

Sung by my close friend Vicky Joshi. I did not release this song. Never will.

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Each and every poem in this thread is amazingly beautiful.. Loved the song too :)

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I wish I had never written any of these poems....
I myself love the song with all my heart and soul.

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Nihal did u write all these ?

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The song is awesome, no doubt!

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Nahi unkay khala ki mami ki phuphi kay khalo kay chahcha jaan nay unhaain likh kay di hain! ;)

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oh samjh aai :smiley:

Waisay great work man :k:

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Nahi mere khala ki mami ki phuphi kay khalo kay chahcha jaan nay mujhe likh kay di hain!;)

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to ham daad bhi aap key khala ki mami ki phuphi kay khalo kay chahcha jaan ko dey detya hian :D

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To create another Taj Mahal someone had to die.
So I guess this is my Taj Mahal of words. :(

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Now please be hopeful and this is a really nice work

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What can you do when the only person who can make you stop crying is the person who infact made you cry?
And the person is not there anymore to wipe your tears or to tell you that its alright.......
I thought true Love Stories never had endings.

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koi jaanay walo me saath marta nahi hai usay peechay chor ke aagay nikalna hi parta hai :frowning: Sad but true reality of life. I just came across this song

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True. Maybe in some another world, in some another time we would be together. I guess till then I must go on, sing a different song, of a different season....

Thats a lovely song by Nusrat Saab. I often hear it.

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By the way fara how do you know my khala ki mami ki phuphi kay khalo kay chahcha jaan???
Tu toh meri akkhi family ko jaanti hai!!!
By the way he is a bit depressed these days, chahchi jaan has hidden away his false teeth somewhere and now koi pretty girls unko line nahi maar rahi......

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You will have to wake up, sooner or later! A few years down the line you will realize that you can mend anything, although right now it seem impossible... Time as they say is the best healer.. let it be...

Any relationship that comes to end, needs time. I won't say you will forget but this heart ache and bitterness will fade away after some years..

Learn to live for others, it works wonders...

Allah Subhana will show you His mercy... Keep faith in Him!

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I know everything :) Why dont u lend him your own bateesi... woh ju aap nay pichlay saal lagwayee thee.