Ana achi nahi hoti
Bohat hi dard deti hy
Suno tum aisa mat karna
K dil k rishton men
Talluq ustawar hone se pehle hi
Qaza achi nahi hoti
Kabhi dil k ujarron men
Zara dekho to jano ge
K banjar sarzameeno per
Saza achi nahi hoti
Suno ye bhool mat jana
Bohat hi dard deti hy
Ana achi nhi hoti…
One of my latest creations…hope u like it…
Re: Ana achi nahi hoti…
Ahan I like it abeeha ! Simple but touching ! Keep writing :k:
Re: Ana achi nahi hoti......
bahut koshut kee k sub se zayada ache line alehda karon, nhi ho saka, sari ki sari bhut achee lagi, bhut alaa g!!!
Re: Ana achi nahi hoti......
thanx aloooot BL nd Muncho:)
Re: Ana achi nahi hoti......
so cute ............;)
nice work can u send me ur fresh poetry through pm?????
Re: Ana achi nahi hoti…
very nice abeeha :k:
Re: Ana achi nahi hoti......
so cute ............;) nice work can u send me ur fresh poetry through pm?????
but that wont be fair with other admirers na g :(
Re: Ana achi nahi hoti......
wow amazing .... this is the first time i am checking out this section.....
beautiful abeeha
keep writing
Re: Ana achi nahi hoti......
thank u sooooooooooo much bheegiyaad nd blindhope......:)
Re: Ana achi nahi hoti......
so cute ............;) nice work can u send me ur fresh poetry through pm?????
but u want to hav my poetry then u can also save them....y pm?
Re: Ana achi nahi hoti......
but that wont be fair with other admirers na g :(
i agree wid u...:)
Re: Ana achi nahi hoti......
shukrun :)
Ahlan wasehlan....:)
Re: Ana achi nahi hoti......
Wonderful like it
Re: Ana achi nahi hoti......
abeeha, its beautiful..
but u want to hav my poetry then u can also save them....y pm?
muje zada poetry chaie es lie ap ko pm k through mangi ha
its all coz of ur praise n support....thax alooooooooot RI nd sufiyan:)
Re: Ana achi nahi hoti......
abeeha, when ur book will be published?
Re: Ana achi nahi hoti......
ye baat to muje itne logon ne kahi hy but book kahan se aa gae....aisa to koi irada nhi hy...abhi itni achi poetry nhi krti men....