I am not a writer so I am not going to try. Plus I am too lazy to do that.
But I found a spelling error. Please see the word in bold and underline.
The correct word is ‘dining’.
‘Godforsaken’, I understand is debatable on various grounds.
That was not the bigger issue.
But the grammar error was more egregious and unacceptable.
Besides, if you are more comfortable in Urdu, maybe you should write your books in Urdu and then have them translated in different languages like Sindhi and English by other people, like Muqawwee123.