"Amjad" na qadaM rok, kay woH door ki maziL

chand_chehra · March 16, 2003, 6:47am

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Guzray hain teray badh bhi kuch logh idhaR say
Lain teri khusHbu na gayE rah-e-guzaR say

Kyu doBti bujhti huwi ankhoo-N main hai roshaN
Ratoo-n ko shikayat hai to itni sehar say

Larza tha badaN is ka meray hath say choo kaR
Dekha tha is nay Mujhay ajaB mast nazar say

Kya thaaN kar nikla tha kaha akay para hai
Pochay to koi is dil-e-sharminda nazaR say

Aya hai bohat daiR main woH shakS par is ko
Jazbaat ki is bheer maiN dekho maiN kidhaR say

Asa to nahi, meri tarha sar-e-lub-e-juu
QadmooN main khra ho kisi aftaaD kay dar say

Din thay kay hamay shehr-e-badaN tak ki khabaR thi
Aur ab nahi agaH teri kher khabaR say

“Amjad” na qadaM rok, kay woH door ki maziL
Niklay gi kisi roZ isi gard-e-safar say

superglue · March 16, 2003, 6:48am

wah wah wah wah
jabardast ;)

chand_chehra · March 16, 2003, 7:14am

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by superglue: *
wah wah wah wah
jabardast ;)
[/QUOTE]

oyeee ap kaha say agaye :)

hanie · March 16, 2003, 7:21am

Kyu doBti bujhti huwi ankhoo-N main hai roshaN
Ratoo-n ko shikayat hai to itni sehar say

Kya thaaN kar nikla tha kaha akay para hai
Pochay to koi is dil-e-sharminda nazaR say

Aya hai bohat daiR main woH shakS par is ko
Jazbaat ki is bheer maiN dekho maiN kidhaR say

Din thay kay hamay shehr-e-badaN tak ki khabaR thi
Aur ab nahi agaH teri kher khabaR say

“Amjad” na qadaM rok, kay woH door ki maziL
Niklay gi kisi roZ isi gard-e-safar say*

bohat alaa haye.
thanks for sharing chandu.

Mirza_Ruswa · March 16, 2003, 8:15am

Bohat Umda

Salaam Mah

Behtareen Intekhaab (as usual)

"Aya hai bohat daiR main woH shakS par is ko
Jazbaat ki is bheer maiN dekho maiN kidhaR say"

la jawaab

keep it up Mah,

Aap k post kiyay huway behtreen kalaam say hamen bhi zehni aassodgi mayassar aati hai. baqol "shakeel" ( lafzi taghayyur k saath)

Aaj ba faiz e nukta shanasaaN tung adab ki rahguzar hai
phir bhi "mahroo" iss dayr main piyaaray saheb dil hai ahl e nazar hai

thanx for sharing such a nice piece.

Sham

Eastern_Thoughts · March 16, 2003, 10:47am

[QUOTE]
Originally posted by chand_chehra: *

Guzray hain teray badh bhi kuch logh idhaR say
Lain teri khusHbu na gayE rah-e-guzaR say

Kyu doBti bujhti huwi ankhoo-N main hai roshaN
Ratoo-n ko shikayat hai to itni sehar say

Larza tha badaN is ka meray hath say choo kaR
Dekha tha is nay Mujhay ajaB mast nazar say
;)
Kya thaaN kar nikla tha kaha akay para hai
Pochay to koi is dil-e-sharminda nazaR say

Aya hai bohat daiR main woH shakS par is ko
Jazbaat ki is bheer maiN dekho maiN kidhaR say

Asa to nahi, meri tarha sar-e-lub-e-juu
QadmooN main khra ho kisi aftaaD kay dar say

Din thay kay hamay shehr-e-badaN tak ki khabaR thi
Aur ab nahi agaH teri kher khabaR say

"Amjad" na qadaM rok, kay woH door ki maziL
Niklay gi kisi roZ isi gard-e-safar say *
[/QUOTE]

CC Amjad Islam Amjad also says....

*chaa.Nd ke saath ka_ii dard puraane nikale
kitane Gam the jo tere Gam ke bahaane nikale *:D

nice choice anyways :)

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · March 16, 2003, 2:23pm

Larza tha badaN is ka meray hath say choo kaR
Dekha tha is nay Mujhay ajaB mast nazar say
Nice :~)

Btw, Congratulation for your 3k

Capricorn · March 16, 2003, 2:41pm

Re: “Amjad” na qadaM rok, kay woH door ki maziL

Excellent :k:

TajMahal · March 16, 2003, 2:44pm

gud 1

--Dream what you want to dream; go where you want to go; be what you want to be cuz you have only one life and one chance to do all the things you want in life.

Amal · March 16, 2003, 2:58pm

Re: “Amjad” na qadaM rok, kay woH door ki maziL

Beautiful CC:k:…bohat piyaari ghazal hey…thanx for sharing:)

WiseGuy · March 16, 2003, 10:26pm

Re: "Amjad" na qadaM rok, kay woH door ki maziL

[QUOTE]
Originally posted by chand_chehra: *

Guzray hain teray badh bhi kuch logh idhaR say
Lain teri khusHbu na gayE rah-e-guzaR say

Kyu doBti bujhti huwi ankhoo-N main hai roshaN
Ratoo-n ko shikayat hai to itni sehar say

Larza tha badaN is ka meray hath say choo kaR
Dekha tha is nay Mujhay ajaB mast nazar say
;)
Kya thaaN kar nikla tha kaha akay para hai
Pochay to koi is dil-e-sharminda nazaR say

Aya hai bohat daiR main woH shakS par is ko
Jazbaat ki is bheer maiN dekho maiN kidhaR say

Asa to nahi, meri tarha sar-e-lub-e-juu
QadmooN main khra ho kisi aftaaD kay dar say

Din thay kay hamay shehr-e-badaN tak ki khabaR thi
Aur ab nahi agaH teri kher khabaR say

"Amjad" na qadaM rok, kay woH door ki maziL
Niklay gi kisi roZ isi gard-e-safar say
[/QUOTE]

Bohat hee khoobsoort, :)
Thanks Chado jee for sharing, and thanks for ;) too...

Anjani_Larki · March 16, 2003, 10:36pm

Itz beautifulll... :)

WiseGuy · March 16, 2003, 10:45pm

Re: Re: “Amjad” na qadaM rok, kay woH door ki maziL

I mean Chando jee
I guess I am not mudhosh

ghazal_kisi_ke · March 17, 2003, 1:10am

Re: “Amjad” na qadaM rok, kay woH door ki maziL

wah wah:k::k:
thanks ofr sharing and congratzz on ur 3K:k:

NikamiJano · March 17, 2003, 1:13am

Re: "Amjad" na qadaM rok, kay woH door ki maziL

[QUOTE]
Originally posted by chand_chehra: *

Kyu doBti bujhti huwi ankhoo-N main hai roshaN
Ratoo-n ko shikayat hai to itni sehar say

Aya hai bohat daiR main woH shakS par is ko
Jazbaat ki is bheer maiN dekho maiN kidhaR say

[/QUOTE]

bohat khoob chando g thanks 4 sharin..and congratulation 4 ur 3k

chand_chehra · March 17, 2003, 10:12pm

Re: Bohat Umda

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Mirza Ruswa: *
Salaam Mah

Behtareen Intekhaab (as usual)

"Aya hai bohat daiR main woH shakS par is ko
Jazbaat ki is bheer maiN dekho maiN kidhaR say"

la jawaab

keep it up Mah,

Aap k post kiyay huway behtreen kalaam say hamen bhi zehni aassodgi mayassar aati hai. baqol "shakeel" ( lafzi taghayyur k saath)

Aaj ba faiz e nukta shanasaaN tung adab ki rahguzar hai
phir bhi "mahroo" iss dayr main piyaaray saheb dil hai ahl e nazar hai

thanx for sharing such a nice piece.

Sham
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sham uncle ap itni tarfain karkay na mujhay 7th asman par pohncha
detay hain :P

ullujii · March 17, 2003, 10:17pm

very nice.. :k:

chand_chehra · March 17, 2003, 10:20pm

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Eastern Thoughts: *

CC Amjad Islam Amjad also says....

*chaa.Nd ke saath ka_ii dard puraane nikale
kitane Gam the jo tere Gam ke bahaane nikale *:D

nice choice anyways :)
[/QUOTE]

bhahi Amjad Islam Amjad also says....:p

Zindagi ke mailey maiN...
khwaahishouN ke railey maiN
tum se kia kahaiN jaanaaN
is qadar jhamailey maiN
:D

chand_chehra · March 17, 2003, 10:21pm

thankoooooooo so much every1 :)

nikii · March 17, 2003, 10:35pm

bhut zaberdast choice ha chando :)