**GulshanoN kaY woh ** rehnaY waalaY
**GhoNsloN maiN woh ** basnaY waalaY
**Taair saaraY ** udaas haiN aaj
**chaman maiN tooTay ** khwaab haiN aaj
**khizaaN kee aamad kaY ** aasaar haiN aaj
**sookhaY pattay bhee ** ro rahai haiN shajar chaman kaY bhee udaas haiN aaj
**SabzaazaaroN kee ** uss ravish par
**Rooh chaman kee ** taRap rahi hai
**yaad-e-gum gushta kee ** lazzatoN maiN ab’r say shaayad aag baras rahi hai
**Shab-e-Wi’sL kee **
**musaafatoN kaY **
**woh humsafar ** yaar saaraY
**apni dagar par ** chaL paRay haiN
**FurqatoN kaY ** jangaloN maiN
**har aan woh abb ** bhaTak rahai haiN
kabhi jo ho sakaY tau palaT kar dekho kuch loug ashkbaar
**abb bhee tumhaari ** raah tukk rahai haiN sisak rahai haiN
Shab-e-Wi’sL kee woh musaafataiN aaj tum ko bulaa rahi haiN jo ho sakaY tau lauT aanaa kaY tumhaaraY jaanaY saY hum bad-naseeboN kee rooh bhee bhaTak rahi hai taRap rahi hai, sisak rahi hai
boht achee poem he bhae, i hope amal bhae wapes ajaen ge,
amal bhae ese narz nehe hote,ramzan ka month he ager kese ke koe bat boree lage he to ap maf kerh deyn Allah mian khosh ho gha or ager koe bat nehe he pher lazme aen AQ bhae ne etne dil se ap ke wapse ke lieye poem lekhe he or seb ke yeihe wish he ap ajao
aap ko bhee mehnat karni hogi... I think Nikammi kee baat maan laiN gey... u know, I so believe that Nikammi should be the one talking to him... unn kee baat he won't or atleast should not deny :-(
An exclusive composition is the best gift a writer could prepare for someone. I know it by experience that it is one of the most difficult thing to do – and that of so beautifully. Hats off to you my friend. And in response to this exclusive poem, I am making this one-off appearance to this forum exclusively for you.
A humble request to all of you: No one is indispensible, you will find many Amals who will be better writers and better human beings. So please bury me in your past and move on. I will consider it a favour to me.
*Sadaa-e-zeest sey keh do ke ab khaamosh rahey
Siwaey ajal ke ab koi nahi bulaaey mujhey
*
I think what I wrote was only good enough for only "one" appearance... When I had left for a short period as an agitation to the injustice against me, it was you who made me come back... Perhaps, you were a better friend of mine than I am of yours :) I remember your words, my friend You leave, I leave. The words that made me stay. We will never find any Amal besides you... kiouN kaY Amal saY zindagi banti hai.. Amal hee chalaa gayaa tau Shaairi kee zindagi kahaaN rahi...?
I remember your long emails convincing me for exactly same what I failed to convince you on... They say grass is always green from the other side... In my case, it was never a grass .. a mirage it was...
I will always consider myself unfortuanate about how my friendship had lesser meaning to you than the friendship that hurted you... I said I will never let people forget you... I dunno how long I will be here as well... Without you, this place will only become a place of "copy-paste" material and "wah wah forum" ... How long will I tolerate that Monotony....? I do not know.... but I will never forget your own words that changed me but I could not even convince you with your own thoughts... Unfortunate that I am.... Will never forgive myself on this:
Your own words I find in my email:
Convincing oneself of the fact that we are part of an imperfect world, rids one of many insolvable puzzles. The idea is not about forgoing principles — the idea is to save the life from unnecessary hassles in the name of pursing principles. You have genuine grievances but retreating from the battlfield was perhaps not the ideal ploy.
kaafi technical faults haiN, misray aik doosray kay saath sahi mil nahi rahe, kichree lag rahi hai, and you have used lots of wrong words. Please be careful next time, otherwise not a bad try.
kaafi technical faults haiN, misray aik doosray kay saath sahi mil nahi rahe, kichree lag rahi hai, and you have used lots of wrong words. Please be careful next time, otherwise not a bad try.
ASN: I am sorry to say your appearance is not even funny at this point. Please, be considerate about the sensitivity and soberness of this forum. This is not a Joke, Cafe, or Video Forum where such behaviour is somewhat tolerated. I am not even going to bother myself explaining you the difference between Nazm and Ghazal VS Nazm and Aazad Nazm. Mods, please, pay some respect to this thread. Thanks.
aazaad nazm? comeone yaar I just said its not making sense what you wrote. Whats wrong in that? ab aise tum sab ko pagal bana do itni lambi deewar-e-cheen jitni ghazal likh kar to mera koi bi haq nahi?
oey ye ghazal hai ya 50% more walay wo paper rolls? itni lumbi?
Personal lagta hai, peechey hatt jao, room dow.
Breath.
Go and learn the definition of ghazal first. pata naheeN kahaaN kahaaN say moo uThaa kar aa jaataY haiN..
**Amal: **Come back yaar. I feel absolutely nothing here without you. Remember, I am asking you because for me you are the difference here for me from anyother site... I have never seen any different Amal nor I wish to see any in future BUT only you...
AMAL oye, show me a show-cause notice in PM, shabash.
just when i was getting interested in poetry again u leave
what kind of topi drama is this, i enjoyed reading your stuff.
