Am I being little over sensetive?

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Got abondend by her mother
That kitten is hurt
Never raind like this before
Man that cloud is hurt
Not getting my sleeps
My dreams are hurt
eyes are like stones
My heart is hurt

Am I being little over sensetive?
or is that you my love I am thinking of?

Dont know what it is? or should I cal it a poem or not? but after a long long time at least I have written something. I am sorry if you have expected better than this from me. May be next time or i might give it few more tries to make it more appealing.

God bless you all!

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Re: Am I being little over sensetive?

Of course we expect better than this from you because we know you are capable of doing so. chodhry merey bhai over sensitive waghera hone ki zaroorat nahi hey. (over)Sensitivity complicates life!

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Re: Am I being little over sensetive?

better short and quality than nothing or long and inane...anyway let your sensitivity inspire your mind...i do it allways...it worked well so far...keep posting!