Alone....

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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alone…

I get a funny feeling,
it comes from deep inside.
I get all mad and angry,
wanting to go and hide.

My doctor calls it depression,
people says it’s just me.
But the thoughts and feelings,
no one will ever be able to see.

Some say I’m psycho,
some say I’m just weird.
It’s like I’m a different person,
and the old me just disappeared.

I get really edgy,
I want to commit suicide real bad.
Then I get a headache,
followed by feeling sad.

I wish I could get help,
I wish it would go away.
Maybe if I keep praying real hard,
it will some day.

yes its poem :snooty:…

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I get really edgy,
I want to commit suicide real bad.
Then I get a headache,
followed by feeling sad.

I wish I could get help,
I wish it would go away.
**Maybe if I keep praying real hard,
it will some day. **

^^

The two oxymoronic stanzas, the first one being at the height of negative extremism and quite not my type; the positive chronology of the two is that the last one is a cure of the first and hence is at the end because whatever comes later is always good what has happened before :flower1:

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Re: Alone....

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Sandleen: *
alone.....

Some say I'm psycho, how TRUE :p

[/QUOTE]

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:k: :k:

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