~All Views Chai Break: July 2012~

[The_Jinx]

Re: ~All Views Chai Break~

@Khalil KhaaN FaaKhta

to, yeh she’r kaisaa rahegaa?**

duukaan-e-'uroosii se ho gar Husn kii tash’heer
to, subHo se pahle hii koii ghar jaaye to achchhaa!**

duukaan-e-'uroosii = Parlour

put this sher on taqtee and see

I still feel the second misra is bigger than the meter of first. What do you think?