Ali saaHab kii farmaaish par...vaalid marHoom kii ek Ghazal

**salaam dosto,

mere signature meN jo mere vaalid marHoom kii ek Ghazal kaa jo she’r darj hai, use dekh kar janaab-e-Ali saaHab ne mere ek dusre thread meN Hukm saadir kiyaa k maiN poorii Ghazal chaspaaN karuuN so unke Hukm kii ta’meel kartaa huuN…ummeed hai k aap sab ko bhii pasand aayegii.

faqat muKhlis,
_______KKF

****Ghazal

mirii bastiyoN meN jo noor hai vo naseeb-e-charKh-e-bariiN nahiiN
yeh meh-e-tamaam bahot sahii, mire daaGh-e-dil se HasiiN nahiiN

abhii Husn_o_'ishq haiN ek se, yahiiN, aao! unko badal na leN
na yeh ashk roye huye mire, na haNsii tumhaarii haNsii nahiiN

voh hazaar meN kahiiN chaar thiiN jo palak pe ban gaiiN motiyaaN
mire dil kii, haaye! vo HasrateN jo kisii taraH bhii kahiiN nahiiN

mirii zindagii kaa vujood hai isii ashk_o_aah ke dosh per
maiN Khushii ko le ke karuuNgaa kia, tire Gham se to yeh HasiiN nahiiN

jo Hareem-e-gul meN sabaa gaii to shameem us meN samaa gaii
magar ab yeh choor haiN baang_zan k bahaar mujla nashiiN nahiiN

tire paas waqt kii hai kamii, agar dekhnaa hai to dekh le!
abhii Khud hii aa ke uThaayegaa vo naqaab ruKh se, nahiiN nahiiN!

tirii har adaa meN fareb hai, mirii har nazar meN hai iltijaa
tu karegaa mujh pe karam kabhii, mire dil ko iskaa yaqeeN nahiiN!


میری بستیوں میں جو نور ہے وہ نصیب چرخ برین نہیں
یہ مہ تمام بہت سہی’ مرے داغ دل سے حسین نہیں

ابھی حسن و عشق ہیں ایک سے’ یہیں انکو آؤ بدل نہ لیں
نہ یہ اشک روۓ ہوئے مرے’ نہ ہنسی تمہاری ہنسیں نہیں

وہ ہزار میں کہیں چار تھیں جو پلک پہ بن گئیں موتیاں
مرے دل کی’ ہاۓ! وہ حسرتیں جو کسی طرح بھی کہیں نہیں

مری زندگی کا وجود ہے اسی اشک و آہ کے دوش پر
میں خوشی کو لے کے کرونگا کیا، ترے غم سے تو یہ حسین نہیں

جو حریم گل میں صبا گی تو شمیم اس میں سما گئی
مگر اب یہ چور ہیں بانگ زن کہ بہار مجلہ نشین نہیں

ترے پاس وقت کی ہے کمی’ اگر دیکھنا ہے تو دیکھ لے
ابھی خود ہی آ کے اٹھاے گا وہ نقاب رخ سے’ نہیں نہیں!

تری ہر ادا میں فریب ہے، مری ہر نظر میں ہے التجا
تو کریگا مجھ پہ کرم کبھی’ مرے دل کو اسکا یقین نہیں **

Re: Ali saaHab kii farmaaish par...vaalid marHoom kii ek Ghazal

Boht he achi Gazal hay,

Re: Ali saaHab kii farmaaish par...vaalid marHoom kii ek Ghazal


shukria janaab bahot bahooot pazeeraaii ke liye :)

Re: Ali saaHab kii farmaaish par…vaalid marHoom kii ek Ghazal

Buhat khoobsoorat ghazal hai :lajwab:

hamari farmaish poori karne ka buhat buhat shukria

Re: Ali saaHab kii farmaaish par…vaalid marHoom kii ek Ghazal

aapko pasand aayii, shukria bahot bahot :slight_smile:

Re: Ali saaHab kii farmaaish par...vaalid marHoom kii ek Ghazal

**tirii har adaa meN fareb hai, mirii har nazar meN hai iltijaa
tu karegaa mujh pe karam kabhii, mire dil ko iskaa yaqeeN nahiiN!

Beautiful :)
**

Re: Ali saaHab kii farmaaish par...vaalid marHoom kii ek Ghazal

Subhan Allah:

مری زندگی کا وجود ہے اسی اشک و آہ کے دوش پر
میں خوشی کو لے کے کرونگا کیا، ترے غم سے تو یہ حسین نہیں

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thank you...to be honest, i loved this she'r too...and, i consider this she'r as the** 'Haasil-e-Ghazal'**** :) shukria**

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shukria janaab...kaash vaalid marHoom baa_Hayaat hote to unkii ijaazat le kar maiN unkaa kalaam syaay'a karvaataa...:(

Re: Ali saaHab kii farmaaish par...vaalid marHoom kii ek Ghazal

It is your inheritance now , you can do whatever you like to do with it. Think it this way :
Your father's material and intellectual property is your property now. Isn't it ?
What if he invented something , would you let it go to waste instead of help humanity with that invention ?

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**it's true but it was kinda his waseeyat not to publish his work...i had the same thinking and wanted to publish it but my siblings [who are equal beneficiaries of my Dad's assets] are against it so i have to respect their decision.

i always wonder why my Dad did NOT wish to publish his work while his ustaad and colleagues published their work and are known to urdu world all over. such names as *AsGhar GonDvii, Jigar Muradabadi, Firaq Gorakhpuri, Harvansh Rai Bachchan, Bismil Allahabadi *etc.**

Re: Ali saaHab kii farmaaish par...vaalid marHoom kii ek Ghazal

If he did not want to publish himself that does not make his wasihat to others not to publish it, unless he specifically forbade others to publish it even after his departure from this world.

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**yeah, my oldest brother says that he heard our dad say on different occasions that he neither wished to publish his work nor wanted his work ever to be published in a book form. this was sorta verbal wasii'at.

i almost had it published once...everything was ready to go. i even had intro written by great urdu critique Dr. [Prof] Gopichand Narang. my brother then stopped it.**

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Such a beautiful kalam should not go to waste , specially if it was being endorsed by Dr. Gopi Chand that I am sure it is worth sharing with the world. I am sure if you talk to some Islamic scholars they can guide you about this wasiat. But you will have to get consent of your other siblings and if one of them does not agree then all you can do is donate his manuscript to some library or museum with the condition that they cannot publish it but it can be used for research purposes.

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**very good idea...and i will persue that, inshaa Allah, and will let you know.

i also thought about creating a website for his work because it won't be in a book form which he was against it. he did read his Ghazals in mushaa'iras around the city.**

Re: Ali saaHab kii farmaaish par...vaalid marHoom kii ek Ghazal

5.
jo Hareem-e-gul meN sabaa gaii to shameem us meN samaa gaii
magar ab yeh choor haiN baang_zan k bahaar mujla nashiiN nahiiN

bohat alaa.

Re: Ali saaHab kii farmaaish par...vaalid marHoom kii ek Ghazal


pazeeraaii ke liye aapkaa bahot bahot shukria Shazia...:)

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very nice!

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Buhat he aala

Re: Ali saaHab kii farmaaish par…vaalid marHoom kii ek Ghazal

boht aala :lajawab: